List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more varied vocabulary. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me find important items quickly and keeps me organized.

提案: Your answer has some hesitation and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember all my tasks. Therefore, I don't worry about forgetting anything, which makes my work more efficient.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better and avoid repeating words. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure to make your answer more natural.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they are not very organized or disciplined. For instance, they may find it difficult to keep track of tasks and often forget important things.

提案: Your answer is good but has minor grammatical mistakes and filler words. Try to avoid fillers and check your grammar, especially verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry. Moreover, I don't have to worry about losing a paper list, and I can easily add or remove items.

× it keeps us stay organized

✓ it keeps us organized

The verb 'keep' is followed by an object and then an adjective, not by 'stay' plus an adjective. So, 'keeps us stay organized' is incorrect; it should be 'keeps us organized'. This is a common mistake where the extra verb 'stay' is unnecessary and grammatically wrong.

× I don't have to worrying about, uh, forgetting the paper list

✓ I don't have to worry about, uh, forgetting the paper list

After 'have to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'have to worrying' is incorrect; it should be 'have to worry'. This is a modal verb usage rule where 'have to' is followed by the base verb.