List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复和语义不明确。可以简洁明了地表达购物时制作清单的原因。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps my family avoid buying unnecessary items and ensures we don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和主谓一致，同时明确表达制作工作清单的好处。

例: Yes, I make a list every day before work because it helps me remember important tasks like meetings. It is very useful and effective.

提案: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，建议避免使用不常见的缩写或术语，清晰说明原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to feel controlled by a schedule.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，建议简洁表达偏好并说明原因，注意句子结构和时态的正确使用。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts that way, especially when I start my day.

× Of course, I had to make a list when we go shopping.

✓ Of course, I have to make a list when we go shopping.

这里使用一般现在时更合适，因为描述的是习惯性动作，而不是过去发生的事情。过去时'had to'表示过去的义务，与句意不符。

× Well, our family go shopping once a week and make a late can help can help us avoid unnecessary purchases and we can can ensure we will not forget the necessary I.

✓ Well, our family goes shopping once a week and making a list can help us avoid unnecessary purchases and we can ensure we will not forget the necessary items.

主语'family'作为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'goes'。'make a late'应为'making a list'，且重复的'can help'应去掉。'necessary I'应为'necessary items'。

× Uh, I have to make a list before I work at before, before I work every day because it can help us, it can helps, it can help us to avoid important things like meeting or something else.

✓ Uh, I have to make a list before I work every day because it can help us avoid important things like meetings or something else.

'can helps'是错误的，情态动词'can'后应接动词原形'help'。重复的'it can help us'应合并。'meeting'应为复数形式'meetings'。

× I think it's, it is very useful and it, it had to work.

✓ I think it's very useful and it has to work.

'had to work'是过去时，句意应为现在时态，故改为'has to work'。

× Oh, it it is maybe associated with their MBTI, you know, uh, seem, seem like me.

✓ Oh, it may be associated with their MBTI, you know, uh, seems like me.

'it it is maybe'重复且用词不当，改为'it may be'更合适。'seem'应为第三人称单数'seems'。

× I, I am, uh, I am I, I am a Jay person.

✓ I am, uh, I am a J person.

句中多余重复'I am'应删除。'Jay'应为'J'，符合MBTI类型的写法。

× So I like to make a list, but others like P person, they don't like to make analysts because they think they don't want to be controlled.

✓ So I like to make a list, but others like P persons, they don't like to make lists because they think they don't want to be controlled.

'P person'应为复数形式'P persons'。'make analysts'错误，应为'make lists'。

× Oh, it must be paper.

✓ Oh, it must be paper.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I don't like a study or work without paper.

✓ I don't like to study or work without paper.

'like a study'错误，'like'后应接动词不定式'to study'。

× I can't use I can, I can't be used to this.

✓ I can't use it, I can't be used to this.

缺少宾语，'use'后应接代词'it'。

× Uh, so I prefer make a list on the paper when I get up and to make a list about what I have to do this day.

✓ Uh, so I prefer to make a list on paper when I get up and make a list about what I have to do that day.

'prefer'后应接不定式'to make'。'on the paper'改为'on paper'更自然。'this day'应为'that day'。