List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating the examiner's question at the start. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences.

例: I didn't use to make a shopping list because I thought it was a waste of time. However, I now always prepare one because it helps me avoid buying duplicates and keeps me focused on what I actually need.

提案: Good direct answer with relevant details. To improve, try to use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' more naturally and check for small grammar points, e.g., 'patients' vital signs' with an apostrophe. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because, as a nurse, effective time management is crucial. For example, it helps me remember to check patients' vital signs and administer medication on time.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by avoiding phrases like 'making this'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' effectively, and try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition, e.g., use 'planning' or 'list-making' instead of 'making this'.

例: I think it depends on a person's personality because some prefer to be spontaneous and dislike planning everything in advance. However, I find planning important as it helps me stay organised and remember important tasks.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I used to make lists on paper because we didn't have technologies like smartphones then.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Use linking words like 'but' and 'now' appropriately.

例: I used to make lists on paper because we didn't have smartphones back then. But now, since I always carry my phone, it's easier for me to write lists on it.

× But now as I always carry my phone with me, it's easier for me to write a list on my phone.

✓ But now, as I always carry my phone with me, it's easier for me to write a list on my phone.

A comma is needed after 'now' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity and flow.

× Some people don't like making this because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to plan everything in advance.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to plan everything in advance.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here because it does not clearly refer to 'making lists'. Replacing 'this' with 'lists' clarifies the meaning.

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

✓ I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

'Technologies' should be plural without 'a', and 'smartphone' should be plural as 'smartphones' to match the plural noun 'technologies'. Also, 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time reference.

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

✓ I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

The verb tense 'don't have' is present tense but the sentence refers to a past time, so it should be changed to past tense 'didn't have'.

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

✓ I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

The preposition 'on the paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' when referring to writing lists.