List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简化句子结构，使表达更地道。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答中应注意语法准确性和连贯性，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to prioritize my tasks, which helps me manage my work efficiently.

提案: 回答中应避免口语填充词，注意语法和句子结构，表达更清晰具体。

例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they want to stay spontaneous, or they remember their main tasks without writing them down.

提案: 回答中应完整表达观点，避免遗漏词汇，句子结构应更完整，表达更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I can access it anytime.

× I'm this kind of people who like to make lists and make sure that everything is under control.

✓ I'm this kind of person who likes to make lists and make sure that everything is under control.

这里的主语是单数形式的"this kind of"，所以后面的名词应为单数"person"，动词也应与单数主语一致，使用"likes"。

× I have a lot of to dos in my work so I have to list all the things in the morning and prioritize the most important part.

✓ I have a lot of to-dos in my work so I have to list all the things in the morning and prioritize the most important part.

"to dos"应写作复合名词"to-dos"，表示多个待办事项，符合复数形式。

× I think it quite works well because it helps me to make sure the priority.

✓ I think it works quite well because it helps me to make sure the priority.

副词"quite"应放在动词"works"之前，正确的副词位置是修饰动词时放在动词前。

× but they they know what their prioritize what they should prioritize.

✓ but they know what they should prioritize.

句子中"their prioritize"结构错误，应去掉多余部分，简化为"they know what they should prioritize"。

× I prefer to make it on my so that I can carry it anywhere and it is quite convenient for me to type it on my cell phone and I will use it at any time.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone so that I can carry it anywhere, and it is quite convenient for me to type it on my cell phone and use it at any time.

句子缺少"phone"一词，导致结构不完整；另外，连接词"and"前应加逗号，保持句子流畅。