List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「without list I'm very struggle with cooking」は「without a list, I struggle a lot with cooking」のように修正できます。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。

例: I always make a list when I shop because I struggle with cooking without one. Since I'm not very flexible in cooking, having a list helps me buy the right ingredients.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「ended up done work」は不自然で、「I often make lists for my work, but I struggle to complete the tasks」などに直すと良いでしょう。文を明確にし、論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

例: I always make a list for my work, but sometimes I fail to complete all the tasks. Although I am good at planning, I find it hard to follow through.

提案: 繰り返しや文法の誤りがあります。「making at least」は「making a list」の誤りと思われます。より自然な表現に直し、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They prefer to do things directly without planning.

提案: 意味は伝わりますが、表現が少し不自然です。「easy to be lost」は「easy to lose」に直すと良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然です。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because paper lists are easy to lose. Also, I can check my list anytime on my phone.

× I always make a list when I shop because without list I'm very struggle with cooking.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because without a list I'm struggling a lot with cooking.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'struggle' should be in the present participle form 'struggling' to correctly express the ongoing difficulty.

× I'm not flexible when it comes to cooking so the list is very essential for shopping.

✓ I'm not flexible when it comes to cooking, so the list is very essential for shopping.

A comma is needed before 'so' to correctly join two independent clauses. This is a sentence structure issue related to conjunction usage.

× I always make a list for my work but it ended up done work because I like to planning or good at planning but I don't have the power to execute them.

✓ I always make a list for my work but it ends up unfinished because I like planning or am good at planning but I don't have the power to execute it.

The phrase 'ended up done work' is incorrect; 'ends up unfinished' better expresses the intended meaning. 'Like to planning' should be 'like planning' or 'am good at planning'. Also, 'them' should be 'it' referring to 'a list' or 'work'. Present tense is used to describe habitual actions.

× I thinks some people think it's in vain because some people think making at least is a waste of time.

✓ I think some people think it's in vain because some people think making at least is a waste of time.

The verb 'think' should be in base form 'think' after 'I' (first person singular). 'Thinks' is third person singular form, so it is incorrect here.

× Doing it directly is better than make a plan.

✓ Doing it directly is better than making a plan.

After 'than', the verb should be in the gerund form 'making' to parallel 'doing'. This is a verb + -ing form issue.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because making a list on paper is easy to be lost.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because making a list on paper is easy to lose.

The phrase 'easy to be lost' is incorrect; the correct form is 'easy to lose'. The verb 'lose' is used in the infinitive form here.

× On my phone I can see anytime and not be lost.

✓ On my phone, I can see it anytime and it will not be lost.

The sentence lacks the object 'it' after 'see' and the second clause needs a subject and verb to be complete. Adding 'it' and 'it will' corrects the sentence structure.