List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I usually when go to the shop". Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say "I usually go shopping once a week, and before that, I write down all the things I need to buy."

例: Yes, I do. I usually go shopping once a week, and before that, I write down all the things I need to buy. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important.

提案: Your answer has some unclear and incorrect phrases, such as "Usually it went to It goes with arranging the items first." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use proper tenses. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can say "Yes, I do. As the owner of a shop on Taobao, I write down my daily priorities. Usually, I start by arranging the items that need to be handled first."

例: Yes, I do. As the owner of a shop on Taobao, I write down my daily priorities. Usually, I start by arranging the items that need to be handled first, which helps me manage my work efficiently.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some repetition, such as "who who always do does". Try to avoid repetition and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I think it's human nature; some people prefer being organized, while others act spontaneously. For instance, my friend often does things based on his mood; if he feels like shopping, he just goes."

例: I think it's human nature; some people prefer being organized, while others act spontaneously. For instance, my friend often does things based on his mood; if he feels like shopping, he just goes without planning.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but has minor grammatical errors, such as "I when I'm outside". Try to avoid such mistakes and use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and saves time. For instance, when I'm outside, I may not have a pen, but I can easily use my phone to write the list."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and saves time. For instance, when I'm outside, I may not have a pen, but I can easily use my phone to write the list.

× I usually when go to the shop once a week and before that I would write down all the things I need for purchasing.

✓ I usually go to the shop once a week and before that I would write down all the things I need for purchasing.

The phrase 'when go' is incorrect because 'when' is unnecessary and disrupts the verb structure. The verb 'go' should be used directly after 'usually' to form a correct present tense statement. Remove 'when' to correct the sentence.

× Usually it went to It goes with arranging the items first.

✓ Usually it goes with arranging the items first.

The sentence incorrectly switches from past tense 'went' to present tense 'goes'. Since the context is about a habitual action, present tense 'goes' is appropriate. Remove 'went to' and keep 'goes' for correct tense consistency.

× I have a friend who who always do does things according to his willingness.

✓ I have a friend who always does things according to his willingness.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'friend' which is singular, so the verb should be 'does' not 'do'. Also, the repeated 'who' is a typographical error. Correct subject-verb agreement by using 'does' and remove the duplicate 'who'.

× For example, I when I'm outside I don't necessarily have a pen, I can just grab my phone to do it.

✓ For example, when I'm outside I don't necessarily have a pen, I can just grab my phone to do it.

The word 'I' before 'when' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing 'I' before 'when' corrects the sentence structure and maintains proper verb usage.