List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，例如“don't like make”应为“don't like to make”。建议使用正确的动词不定式结构，并且回答可以更简洁自然。

例: No, I usually don't like to make a list when I shop, but I do make one when I travel to buy souvenirs.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“don't like do”应为“don't like to do”，以及“randomly and unpredictable”应为“random and unpredictable”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并且表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but it is not always effective because I don't like to follow it strictly, and unexpected things can happen.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“this kind of people”应为“these kinds of people”，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，使用更准确的表达。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they value freedom and feel lists limit them. For example, they prefer to enjoy coffee instead of focusing on work tasks from a list.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“set the deadline of my list is”应为“set the deadline of my list to be”，并且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子，注意语法和连贯性。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because my deadlines are often more than a year away, and it's easier to update goals digitally than on paper.

× No, I usually don't like make a list when I shop, but when I go to travel I will make a list to buy some souvenir.

✓ No, I usually don't like making a list when I shop, but when I go to travel I will make a list to buy some souvenirs.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing preferences, so 'like make' is incorrect; it should be 'like making'. Also, 'souvenir' should be plural 'souvenirs' because it refers to multiple items.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. However, it did not work effectively. The main reason is that I don't like do something with 100% copies on my list.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. However, it did not work effectively. The main reason is that I don't like doing something with 100% copies on my list.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing', so 'like do' is incorrect; it should be 'like doing'.

× Another thing can happen randomly and unpredictable.

✓ Another thing can happen randomly and unpredictably.

The adverb form 'unpredictably' should be used to modify the verb 'happen', not the adjective 'unpredictable'.

× In my opinion, this kind of people like freedom and they don't like something which limit them, so they don't like making lists.

✓ In my opinion, this kind of people like freedom and they don't like something which limits them, so they don't like making lists.

The verb should agree with the singular relative pronoun 'which' referring to 'something', so 'limit' should be 'limits'.

× For example, they want to drink coffee, but the list means that the list shows that they need to work.

✓ For example, they want to drink coffee, but the list shows that they need to work.

The phrase 'the list means that the list shows' is redundant; 'means' is unnecessary here.

× However, they will perform and enjoy coffee.

✓ However, they will perform and enjoy drinking coffee.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund, so 'enjoy coffee' is less natural than 'enjoy drinking coffee'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always set the deadline of my list is more than one year later, so I will have a lot of things will change.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always set the deadline of my list to be more than one year later, so many things will change.

The phrase 'set the deadline of my list is' is incorrect; it should be 'set the deadline of my list to be'. Also, 'a lot of things will change' is better expressed as 'many things will change'.

× If I write on paper, it is difficult for me to change the the goals, yes.

✓ If I write on paper, it is difficult for me to change the goals, yes.

There is a repeated word 'the the' which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'the'.