List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, most of the time we make a list before we go to the supermarket because it helps us to be focused when we go inside the supermarket and it also helps us to be efficient while picking things.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, sometimes I do make to do lists for my walk because it helps me to be focused on the schedule and I think these this kind of lists help me to be more productive in the entire day.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like making list because they don't want to pre plan things, but on the other hand it is really important if we have a planned list for everything in our hand.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me to memorize things, but nowadays I'm shifting myself towards phone because I can access this list easily if I am having it on my phone and it is also available at anytime in any of my devices.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words for better flow. Also, use singular or plural consistently ("a list" or "lists").
例: Yes, I usually make a list before going to the supermarket because it helps me stay focused and pick items efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: Be careful with word choice and grammar ("walk" should be "work"). Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Try to be more concise and specific.
例: Yes, I sometimes make to-do lists for my work because they help me stay focused on my schedule and increase my productivity throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: Improve grammar by using plural forms correctly ("lists") and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words like "however" to contrast ideas clearly. Be more specific about reasons.
例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer not to pre-plan; however, having a planned list can be very helpful for staying organised.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 80.0提案: Good use of contrast and reasons. To improve, avoid redundancy ("on my phone" repeated) and use linking words like "however" for smoother transitions. Also, watch for small grammar errors.
例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me memorise things; however, I'm gradually shifting to using my phone since I can access the list easily anytime on any device.
文法
× I think some people don't like making list because they don't want to pre plan things, but on the other hand it is really important if we have a planned list for everything in our hand.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they don't want to pre plan things, but on the other hand it is really important if we have a planned list for everything in our hand.
The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about lists in general.
× I think some people don't like making list because they don't want to pre plan things, but on the other hand it is really important if we have a planned list for everything in our hand.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they don't want to pre plan things, but on the other hand it is really important if we have a planned list for everything in our hands.
The phrase 'in our hand' should be 'in our hands' because it refers to something held collectively by multiple people, so the plural form 'hands' is correct.
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