List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين وضوح إجاباتك وتجنب الأخطاء اللغوية مثل استخدام كلمات غير صحيحة (مثل "lust" بدلاً من "list")، وقلل من التردد في الكلام. استخدم جمل واضحة ومباشرة مع تفاصيل داعمة محددة.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything.

提案: حاول تقليل التردد والكلمات الزائدة مثل "uh" و"so uh"، واستخدم تراكيب لغوية أكثر دقة. أضف تفاصيل محددة توضح كيف تساعدك القوائم في تنظيم عملك.

例: Yes, I make a list every morning before starting work. It helps me prioritize tasks and avoid wasting time. For instance, yesterday I completed all my important tasks efficiently thanks to my list.

提案: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أكثر وضوحاً وتنظيماً، وتجنب التكرار والأخطاء اللغوية. استخدم جمل كاملة مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات وصل مناسبة.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it controls their time too much or makes them feel overwhelmed. They prefer to be more spontaneous in their daily activities.

提案: حاول التعبير عن تفضيلاتك بوضوح وباستخدام كلمات مناسبة، وتجنب التردد والتكرار. اشرح سبب تفضيلك مع أمثلة واضحة.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better. For example, when I write a list on paper, I feel more satisfied after completing each item.

× I really think that lust is organized all you think thoughts.

✓ I really think that list is organized for all your thoughts.

The word 'lust' is a misspelling of 'list'. Also, the phrase 'all you think thoughts' is incorrect; it should be 'all your thoughts' to correctly use the possessive adjective 'your' and the plural noun 'thoughts'.

× So I advise all people to make lists when you're going to shop or when you're going, uh, to trap.

✓ So I advise all people to make lists when they are going shopping or when they are going to the market.

The pronoun 'you're' (you are) is incorrectly used here; it should be 'they are' to refer generally to people. Also, 'to trap' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'to the market' or 'shopping' fits better. Additionally, 'going to shop' should be 'going shopping' to use the correct verb form.

× Yes, Sir, I uh, make, uh, I lost every day, uh, when uh, beginning the day and uh, it helped me to organize my day and uh, to know what I have to do uh, so uh, I avoid the wasting time by doing last.

✓ Yes, Sir, I make a list every day when beginning the day and it helps me to organize my day and to know what I have to do, so I avoid wasting time by doing last.

The word 'lost' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'list'. The phrase 'I avoid the wasting time' is incorrect; it should be 'I avoid wasting time' without 'the'. Also, 'doing last' is unclear; it likely means 'doing tasks' or 'doing the list' but is left as 'doing last' here for correction of grammar only.

× I don't know, actually, some of people don't like uh, control their time by making le last.

✓ I don't know, actually, some people don't like to control their time by making lists.

The phrase 'some of people' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. 'Making le last' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'making lists'. Also, 'like uh, control' should be 'like to control' to use the correct infinitive form after 'like'.

× Oh don't, or thinking about making lists as uh, uh. Overloaded make make them overloaded.

✓ Or they think about making lists as something that makes them feel overloaded.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The phrase 'Overloaded make make them overloaded' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the adjective use.

× I, I prefer to make a list, uh, buy a paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'buy a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' to indicate the medium used for making the list.

× I think uh, when I uh, do it by Bebo, I feel more uh, achievement when I uh, a clearer, A clearer, diverse when I do it, I, I feel.

✓ I think when I do it by phone, I feel more achievement because it is clearer and more diverse when I do it.

'Do it by Bebo' is likely a mispronunciation of 'by phone'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; the correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and adjective use.