List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I usually make a shopping list to avoid spending too much money.'

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid spending too much money when I go shopping.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example, 'I like making lists for work, but sometimes they don't help because things often change or get interrupted.'

例: I like making lists for my work, but sometimes they don't help because tasks often change or get interrupted.

提案: Your answer is vague and contains errors. Try to give a clearer reason with proper vocabulary and grammar. For example, 'Maybe some people prefer freedom and don't want to be restricted by lists.'

例: Maybe some people prefer freedom and don't want to be restricted by making lists.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my iPhone because it's convenient. You can create a list and set reminders easily.'

例: I prefer making lists on my iPhone because it's very convenient. You can create a list and set reminders to help you remember tasks.

× Yes I do, I usually make plans to go shop in case of spend too much money.

✓ Yes I do, I usually make plans to go shopping in case I spend too much money.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the '-ing' form of the verb to indicate the activity, so 'go shop' should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'in case of spend' is incorrect; it should be 'in case I spend' to form a proper conditional clause.

× Things always be adapt, interrupt sometimes.

✓ Things always adapt and sometimes interrupt.

The original sentence uses 'be adapt' incorrectly; 'adapt' is a verb and should be used in the correct form. Also, 'interrupt sometimes' is awkward; adding 'and sometimes interrupt' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Maybe some people like free. They don't want to be arrange arranged.

✓ Maybe some people like freedom. They don't want to be arranged.

'Like free' is incorrect; the noun form 'freedom' should be used. Also, 'be arrange arranged' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'be arranged'.

× I prefer make a list on my iPhone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my iPhone.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to make' should be used instead of the bare verb 'make'.

× Like you make a list 1st and you can add an alarm clock to mention you do that.

✓ For example, you make a list first and you can add an alarm to remind you to do that.

The phrase 'to mention you do that' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'to remind you to do that'. Also, 'alarm clock' is better shortened to 'alarm' in this context, and '1st' should be written as 'first'.