List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop at the supermarket to avoid forgetting anything. However, when I shop online, I find it more convenient and don't need a list.

提案: 回答中有较多语气词和语法错误，建议减少口头语，注意语法准确性，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me work more efficiently. By organizing tasks clearly, I can complete them quickly and in an orderly manner.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: Some people dislike making lists because it requires extra thinking, which can be tiring after work or study. Therefore, they prefer to avoid this additional effort.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，建议完整表达观点，注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: It depends on the situation. When I study at home, I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can distract me. However, when I go out, I prefer using my phone to make lists for convenience.

× every time I need to go to the supermarket I will make a list in case I forget something.

✓ Every time I need to go to the supermarket, I will make a list in case I forget something.

句子中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。虽然这不是单复数错误，但为了表达清楚，建议加上逗号。

× of course it work.

✓ Of course it works.

主语是第三人称单数it，谓语动词work应加-s变为works，表示第三人称单数形式。

× It help me do something more, uh, orderly and, uh, quickly

✓ It helps me do things more orderly and quickly.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。

× and I know what should I do?

✓ and I know what I should do.

疑问句语序错误，陈述句中应为“what I should do”，而非“what should I do”。

× making a list requires people to thinking

✓ making a list requires people to think

动词require后接不定式to do，不能用动名词thinking，应改为to think。

× So they do not really they are well.

✓ So they do not really feel well.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整，应补充谓语feel，表达“他们感觉不好”。

× when I was I'm when I am studying.

✓ when I am studying.

时态混用，前半句“when I was”不符合上下文，应去掉，保持现在时态。