List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语气词“uh”，影响流畅性，且表达不够自然，句子结构稍显混乱。建议减少语气词，简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone, especially when I need to buy essential items. This helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

提案: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意语法和时态的正确使用。

例: Yes, I often make lists for work because my mentor gives me many tasks at once. Making lists helps me remember everything and perform better.

提案: 表达不够准确，存在语法错误和重复，且使用了语气词“uh”。建议提高表达准确性，避免重复和语气词，使用更自然的表达。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They prefer to rely on their memory and focus on taking action instead.

提案: 回答较为完整，但时态使用不当，句子稍显冗长。建议注意时态一致，简化句子，使表达更自然。

例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can check my list anytime, and I don't have to worry about forgetting a pen.

× Yes, sometimes my mentor would tell me many things to do at a one time, so I had to make a list to prevent I forget them and at at performance a positive way to contribute to my work.

✓ Yes, sometimes my mentor would tell me many things to do at one time, so I have to make a list to prevent forgetting them and to perform in a positive way to contribute to my work.

句中“had to”与上下文时间不符，应使用一般现在时“have to”；“prevent I forget them”结构错误，应使用动名词形式“prevent forgetting them”；“at a one time”中冠词使用错误，应为“at one time”；“at at performance”重复且用词不当，应改为“to perform”。这些错误涉及时态、动词形式和介词使用。建议注意时态一致性，动词后接动名词形式，以及介词和冠词的正确使用。

× They need to prove that they have a good memory and don't need make lists.

✓ They need to prove that they have a good memory and don't need to make lists.

“don't need make lists”中缺少不定式“to”，正确结构应为“don't need to make lists”。这是动词后接不定式的用法错误。建议记住某些动词后需接不定式形式。

× sometimes I didn't take a pen with me when I go out, so it is useless to list them on the paper.

✓ sometimes I don't take a pen with me when I go out, so it is useless to list them on paper.

句中“didn't take”与“when I go out”时态不一致，应统一为一般现在时“don't take”；“on the paper”中冠词“the”多余，应为“on paper”。建议注意时态一致性和冠词的正确使用。