List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating that you always make a shopping list to help you remember items, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because sometimes there are many items to buy, and the list helps me remember everything clearly.

提案: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use linking words to organize your ideas and improve clarity. For example, explain that you prioritize tasks on your to-do list, which helps you stay organized and focused.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because I have many tasks. I prioritize them from first to last, which helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear expressions and grammar errors. Try to express the idea more clearly by saying that some people dislike lists because they feel restricted or pressured by them, which limits their freedom.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel that lists are too strict and force them to follow a schedule, which makes them feel less free to do things spontaneously.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but has some repetition and minor grammar issues. Try to make your response more fluent by removing repeated words and explaining why paper lists are better for you, using linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can see the whole list at a glance, and it's easy to add new items whenever I want.

× Yes I always make a shop at least when I shop because sometime it's too many too many item to buy and it's the make me straight to remember that then I and and and the list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list at least when I shop because sometimes there are too many items to buy and it helps me remember, so I make the list.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches such as 'item' instead of 'items' and 'sometime' instead of 'sometimes'. Also, 'make a shop' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I always make a shop at least when I shop because sometime it's too many too many item to buy and it's the make me straight to remember that then I and and and the list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list at least when I shop because sometimes there are too many items to buy and it helps me remember, so I make the list.

The phrase 'make a shop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make a list'. Also, 'make me straight to remember' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'. Prepositions and phrases need to be used correctly for clarity.

× Yes, I always the two do do the To Do List for my works because I have many works to do and I will give it a priority to do in the first, the second, the third things and that keep me in the way.

✓ Yes, I always do the To Do List for my work because I have many tasks to do and I prioritize them as first, second, and third, and that keeps me on track.

'Works' is incorrectly pluralized; 'work' as an uncountable noun is correct here. Also, 'give it a priority' should be 'prioritize them'. The sentence structure and word choice are corrected for grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, I always the two do do the To Do List for my works because I have many works to do and I will give it a priority to do in the first, the second, the third things and that keep me in the way.

✓ Yes, I always do the To Do List for my work because I have many tasks to do and I prioritize them as first, second, and third, and that keeps me on track.

The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× I think because they think that the making list is too straight and too deadly straight term for them and that forced them to do the thing that you want and don't freedom to to do anything.

✓ I think it's because they feel that making lists is too strict and too rigid for them, and that forces them to do things they don't want to and they don't have the freedom to do anything else.

The words 'straight' and 'deadly straight term' are incorrect adjectives here; 'strict' and 'rigid' are appropriate. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× I think because they think that the making list is too straight and too deadly straight term for them and that forced them to do the thing that you want and don't freedom to to do anything.

✓ I think it's because they feel that making lists is too strict and too rigid for them, and that forces them to do things they don't want to and they don't have the freedom to do anything else.

The phrase 'don't freedom to to do anything' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have the freedom to do anything'. Proper preposition and auxiliary verb usage is necessary.

× I prefer to do a list in the paper because I think I can see the overview of the list in the first in in in the one look and I can add up anything.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can see an overview of the list at a glance and I can add anything.

The preposition 'in the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. Also, 'add up anything' is better as 'add anything'. Prepositions and phrases are corrected for natural usage.