List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够直接和连贯，句子结构混乱且有重复填充词（umm, like）。需要练习用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体理由支持，用连接词使逻辑清晰。同时注意时态和代词的正确使用，控制在最多五句内。建议用简单清晰的表达，例如："No, I usually don’t make a shopping list. I prefer to browse because I enjoy comparing things, and shopping feels more enjoyable that way."

例: No, I usually don’t make a shopping list. I prefer to browse because I enjoy comparing different items, and shopping feels more enjoyable when it's spontaneous.

提案: 回答时时态和词汇使用混乱，信息不清晰。需要先用一句直接回答（Yes/No），然后说明你如何做（e.g. use a timetable），再举一两个具体例子来证明效果。减少填充词并注意时态一致。可以这样改："Yes, I make a timetable for my university work. It helps me organize tasks, for example I schedule economics on Mondays and English on weekends."

例: Yes, I make a timetable for my university assignments. It helps me stay organized — for example, I schedule economics homework on Mondays and set aside weekends for English tasks.

提案: 回答一般但表达不够准确且有语法错误（e.g. subject-verb agreement, word choice like 'lease'）。建议先给出一个或两个明确原因，然后用一个具体例子支持，并使用连接词使逻辑连贯。比如："Some people find lists too restrictive, and others don't stick to them because they prefer flexibility."

例: Some people find lists too restrictive, so they prefer to be flexible. For example, a friend of mine writes a list but rarely follows it, so the list becomes meaningless.

提案: 表达含糊且有错误（词汇、句法和人称）。应先直接回答偏好，然后给出具体原因，用简洁句子说明感受或优缺点。避免无关或错误的人名词。可改为："I prefer paper because I enjoy writing by hand; it helps me remember and feels more personal."

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better and feels more personal and enjoyable.

× I don't want to make a list when I will shop because that I think it is umm very difficult and I like to see many I like than I buy.

✓ I don't want to make a list when I shop because I think it's very difficult, and I prefer to look around rather than plan what I buy.

句子结构混乱，时态和从句连接错误。原句中使用了“when I will shop”（将来时）与一般现在时的习惯动作不符；“because that I think”冗余且不自然；“I like to see many I like than I buy”语序和比较结构错误。建议：表示购物时的习惯用一般现在时，用 because 引导原因从句，比较时用 rather than 或 prefer to ... rather than ...，保持句子简洁。

× Yes, actually I will do a timetable or lease for our university when I was during a many homework.

✓ Yes, actually I make a timetable for my university work when I have a lot of homework.

时态和词汇使用错误。原句混用将来时（I will do）和过去时（when I was），且“during a many homework”和“lease”用法不正确。建议：表达经常性或习惯性动作用一般现在时，表示有很多作业用have a lot of homework，timetable 用来表示计划表。

× I repent maybe Monday I do the uh economy homework and some and the as yesterday I will done more uh English work.

✓ For example, on Monday I did the economics homework, and yesterday I did more English work.

时态混乱与词汇错误。原句有“repent”用错（应为例如/for example），“maybe Monday I do”时态不对，应使用过去式描述具体已完成的任务；“I will done”是错的助动词与过去分词组合。建议：描述过去发生的事情用过去式（did），不要混用将来时和过去分词。

× For example, my friends may be just write the list but he don't follow to Dunn and they think it is just maybe.

✓ For example, my friend may just write the list but he doesn't follow it, and they think it's unnecessary.

代词和主谓一致问题。“my friends”是复数但后文用单数he，代词指代不清；“don't follow to Dunn”中不需要介词to，且“Dunn”显然错误或拼写问题；“it is just maybe”表达不自然。建议：保持代词一致（若指单个朋友用 my friend ... he），遵循正确的动词形式（doesn't）并用 follow it 或 follow the list，使用明确词汇如 unnecessary。

× Another day, I think many people like to use the to write the list, but I like to use the paper because Anthony like to write feelings and it is make me very enjoyable.

✓ Nowadays, I think many people like to use their phones to write lists, but I like to use paper because I like writing by hand and it makes me very happy.

时态与词汇以及主语不明问题。“Another day”用词不当，应为 Nowadays 或 These days；“use the to write the list”缺少名词（phone）；“Anthony like to write feelings”不清楚且错误，可能想表达“我喜欢手写感受”；“it is make me very enjoyable”语法错误，正确应为 it makes me happy。建议：使用常用短语 Nowadays，明确名词（phones/paper），保持主谓一致（makes），用自然表达如 writing by hand / it makes me happy。