List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy many items. For example, if I prepare for a party, I write everything on my phone so I don’t forget anything. Otherwise, I only remember a few items and go without a list.

提案: Give a clear direct answer, avoid long unclear explanations and correct tenses. Explain briefly why lists rarely work for you with a specific reason and a linking word (e.g., because, so). Limit to two or three sentences.

例: No, I rarely make work lists; only once in a while. This is because my schedule often changes and I find it hard to follow plans, so a list does not help me stay organized.

提案: Start with a general statement and give one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid religious or vague phrasing unless relevant; be specific about causes (e.g., unpredictability, preference for flexibility). Use correct grammar and concise sentences.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and feel plans can be disrupted. For instance, unexpected events or changing priorities often make strict lists pointless.

提案: Answer directly, use correct phrases and concise supporting reasons with linking words. Mention specific advantages of phone lists (searchable, accessible, reminders). Keep within three sentences and remove repetition.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because they are easy to find and I can set reminders. For example, my notes app syncs across devices so I never lose the list.

× Uh, it's depends on how much items am I going to buy.

✓ Uh, it depends on how many items I am going to buy.

Use 'it depends' (third person singular verb 'depends' with subject 'it'). Use 'how many' for countable plural nouns (items). The clause 'am I going to buy' should follow normal statement word order 'I am going to buy' not question order.

× Uh, if it's, uh, large number, I may be, uh, make list.

✓ Uh, if it's a large number, I may make a list.

Use the article 'a' with 'large number' and the noun 'list' needs an article. The verb sequence should be 'may make' (modal + base form), not 'may be make'.

× Otherwise, I just remember the items and, uh, going to buy that particular items.

✓ Otherwise, I just remember the items and am going to buy those particular items.

Match verb form: use auxiliary 'am' before 'going to' for future intention. Use 'those' to refer to plural 'items' and keep plural noun 'items' consistent. Alternatively: '...and will buy those particular items.'

× Uh, in my life, I only list 2.

✓ Uh, in my life, I only list two items.

Write out small numbers in words in speech and include the noun 'items' after the number for clarity.

× No, umm, I just uh, do list from my work is like, uh, once in a blue moon because when I preplant something, it's not been happening anyway.

✓ No, umm, I just make lists for work once in a blue moon because when I preplan something, it usually does not happen.

Use 'make lists' for the action. 'For work' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Once in a blue moon' is the idiom. Use present simple 'usually does not happen' rather than awkward 'it's not been happening'.

× So umm, and if I uh, make a plan, I didn't follow up because I haven't told her So my old routine.

✓ So umm, if I make a plan, I don't follow up because I haven't told her; it's my old routine.

Maintain present simple 'make' and 'do not follow up' for habitual actions. Use present perfect 'haven't told' is acceptable to indicate not telling so far. Add a connector and punctuation for clarity and correct word order 'it's my old routine'.

× Because nowadays a lot of people think that if we plan yearly, it may be does not happening anymore.

✓ Because nowadays many people think that if we plan ahead, it may not happen anymore.

Use 'many people' instead of 'a lot of people' (both acceptable but 'many' is concise). 'Plan yearly' is unclear; 'plan ahead' or 'make long-term plans' is better. Use correct negative form 'may not happen' not 'may be does not happening'.

× Even I also believe that because it's all about in hand of God in my belief because God is to going to.

✓ I also believe that because I think everything is in God's hands.

Use idiomatic preposition 'in someone's hands'. Simplify and correct word order. 'God is to going to' is ungrammatical; express belief as 'everything is in God's hands'.

× Most probably I prefer to least on my mobile phone because when I write on paper, I maybe forgot where was the paper.

✓ I prefer to list on my mobile phone because when I write on paper I may forget where the paper is.

Use 'prefer to list' (not 'prefer to least'). Use modal 'may' + base verb 'forget'. Use correct word order for location question turned statement: 'where the paper is'.

× So in case of mobile phone, if you forgot we can just call on the phone, we can find it and check it out.

✓ So with a mobile phone, if you forget, you can call it or use the phone to find the note and check it.

Maintain consistent subject pronouns and correct tense 'forget' not 'forgot' for general possibility. Clarify actions: 'call it' or 'use the phone's search' rather than vague repetition. Ensure verbs agree with subject 'you can'.

× So it easy to list in mobile phone rather than paper because it's easy to find if I before got that.

✓ So it's easier to make a list on a mobile phone rather than on paper because it's easier to find later if I saved it there.

Use comparative 'easier' to compare two options. Use articles 'a mobile phone' and prepositions 'on paper'. Replace awkward 'if I before got that' with 'if I saved it there' to express previous action correctly.