List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce filler words, correct grammar (e.g., "when I go shopping"), and give one specific example of what you include on the list. Use a linking word to add the reason. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes. I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. For example, I usually write down fresh produce and household essentials so I can buy everything in one trip.

提案: Give a direct, relevant response and avoid saying you have no knowledge. State clearly whether you use lists for work, explain briefly why, and give a short example or result. Use linking words to contrast ideas if needed.

例: Sometimes I use a work list. If a task is complex or time-sensitive, I write a checklist to stay organized; otherwise I handle small tasks from memory.

提案: Provide clearer reasons with accurate vocabulary. Start with a direct statement, then give two specific reasons (e.g., they prefer flexibility, they trust memory). Use linking words such as "because" and "for example." Avoid invented words like "knowledgeer."

例: Some people dislike lists because they prefer flexibility; for example, they enjoy deciding plans spontaneously. Others trust their memory and feel lists are unnecessary.

提案: Answer directly and eliminate fillers. State your preference, give two clear reasons with linking words, and include a brief example of how you use your phone list. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use correct grammar.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to update. For example, I use a notes app to tick off items while I shop, so I never lose my list.

× when I go shop, uh, when I go shopping, uh, I umm, I make a list because of I tend to forget umm, items easily.

✓ When I go shopping, I make a list because I tend to forget items easily.

Use the correct verb form and word order: 'go shopping' is the standard expression (not 'go shop'). Remove 'because of' before a clause and use 'because' + clause. Also drop filler words. This fixes present tense usage and sentence structure.

× That's why I make a list for my organized shoppings.

✓ That's why I make a list to stay organized when shopping.

Use the adjective 'organized' correctly and a non-count noun 'shopping' without plural. 'For my organized shoppings' is ungrammatical: use an infinitive purpose clause 'to stay organized' and 'shopping' as an activity.

× I think when we are work working anywhere so list is not important and otherwise it's important.

✓ I think when we are working anywhere a list is not important, but in other situations it is important.

Correct verb form is 'working' (present progressive) and 'a list' needs an article. Use a contrastive conjunction 'but' and clearer phrasing 'in other situations'. This corrects tense and sentence structure.

× So I I I have no knowledge for these types of topics.

✓ So I have no knowledge about these types of topics.

Reduce repeated pronouns and use the correct preposition 'about' with 'knowledge'. 'For' is not idiomatic here.

× Some people don't like making list because it's their personal choices and I think a list is not important when you are a good knowledgeer.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it's their personal choice, and I think a list is not important when you have good knowledge.

Use plural 'lists' to match 'some people' or change structure; 'personal choice' should be singular here. 'Knowledgeer' is not an English word; use 'have good knowledge' or 'are knowledgeable'.

× That's why some people don't like list.

✓ That's why some people don't like lists.

Use plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people'.

× Umm, obviously I prefer to make a list on phones because umm, phone is very uh, easier to make a list or you are going everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is much easier for making a list when you are going everywhere.

Use the possessive 'my phone' or 'a phone' and the definite article 'the phone' when referring to the device. Use comparative 'much easier' and correct gerund 'for making a list'. Fix word order for clarity.

× You just uh, umm, check on your phone and the list is easy here.

✓ You can just check your phone and the list is easily accessible.

Replace 'check on your phone' with 'check your phone' and rephrase 'the list is easy here' to 'the list is easily accessible' for natural English and correct adverb placement.