List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện phát âm, ngữ pháp và tính mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng nặng như "uh"; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau là một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "it's will" → "it will" và dùng số lượng câu không quá 5. Ví dụ: nêu lý do chính, rồi bổ sung chi tiết hoặc ví dụ.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me buy only what I need. For example, last week I saved 20 minutes by using my list, so I didn’t wander around the supermarket or forget anything.

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, trật tự từ và từ vựng chính xác. Tránh tiếng ậm ừ, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: cách bạn sắp xếp công việc, lợi ích cụ thể). Sửa lỗi như "every days" → "every day", "it's have me" → "it helps me".

例: Definitely. I make a to-do list every day because it helps me organise tasks and avoid forgetting important duties. For instance, I prioritise urgent tasks first and check them off as I complete them, which improves my productivity.

提案: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và dùng lý do cụ thể, rõ ràng. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt không tự nhiên; dùng linking words như "because" hoặc "maybe" để kết nối ý. Đưa ví dụ ngắn để minh họa. Ví dụ sửa: "Some people don't like lists because..."

例: Some people don't like making lists because it can feel time-consuming and restrictive. For example, busy people may prefer to decide tasks on the go rather than spending time writing them down.

提案: Cải thiện từ vựng và sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ "farmer" → "paper"). Nói rõ ý chính (paper vs phone), đưa 1–2 lý do cụ thể và 1 ví dụ ngắn. Tránh nói quá nhiều tiếng ngắt quãng như "uh" và câu hỏi tu từ ở cuối.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand feels easier and helps me remember things better. For example, when I write a grocery list on paper I often recall items without checking my phone.

× Yes, of course, uh, I always make a list when I go to the shop, mainly because it's will make me save time, uh, and uh, save a lot of time, uh, to go there and just buy anything I need and don't waste time to think about what we need.

✓ Yes, of course. I always make a list when I go to the shop, mainly because it will help me save time and prevent me from wasting time thinking about what I need to buy.

The original uses 'it's will' which incorrectly combines 'it is' and 'will'. Use the modal 'will' with the base verb: 'it will help'. Also 'make me save time' is unnatural; 'help me save time' is correct. Use consistent pronoun 'I' rather than 'we' to match the speaker. Suggestions: remove filler words, use 'it will help me save time' and 'prevent me from wasting time thinking about what I need to buy.'

× Definitely. I make a list every days, uh, when I start to work, I always write a short list to do umm, in the beginning, uh, to starting work because it's have me organize and ensure I don't forget the importance tax and unsold make me, uh, follow the, uh, productivities.

✓ Definitely. I make a list every day. When I start work, I always write a short to-do list at the beginning because it helps me get organized and ensure I don't forget important tasks or unsold items, and it helps me follow my productive routine.

Errors: 'every days' should be singular 'every day' (frequency adverb). 'to starting work' is incorrect infinitive/gerund use; use 'when I start work' or 'to start work'. 'it's have me organize' mixes 'it is' with wrong verb form; correct is 'it helps me get organized' (present tense). 'importance tax and unsold' is unclear; likely 'important tasks and unsold items'. 'make me follow the productivities' should be 'helps me follow my productive routine' or 'maintain productivity'. Suggestions: use 'every day', correct verb forms and idiomatic phrases like 'to-do list', 'helps me get organized', and 'important tasks.'

× Hi thing that'll be is take a lot of take a lot of time or they so lazy for do this.

✓ I think that is because it takes a lot of time, or they are too lazy to do it.

The original sentence has severe word order and form errors: 'Hi' should be 'I', 'thing that'll be' is an incorrect phrase; use 'I think that is because'. Use correct verb form 'takes' to agree with singular 'it' (subject-verb agreement). 'they so lazy for do this' should be 'they are too lazy to do it' using 'too...to' structure. Suggestions: use clear subject 'it', correct verb agreement 'takes', and the infinitive pattern 'to do'.

× I think I refer to the farmer mainly because I think right on paper make me feel easier and comfortable than on the phone.

✓ I think I prefer paper mainly because writing on paper makes me feel more at ease and comfortable than using the phone.

'refer to the farmer' seems to be wrong word choice; correct is 'prefer paper'. 'right on paper' is likely 'write on paper'. Use subject-verb agreement: 'writing/on paper makes me' or 'writing on paper makes me feel'. 'feel easier' is incorrect; use 'feel more at ease' or 'feel easier' is unidiomatic. Suggestions: replace incorrect words ('refer'->'prefer', 'farmer'->'paper', 'right'->'write'), use 'makes me feel more at ease', and maintain parallel comparison 'than using the phone.'

× You know, uh, if you depend on your phone too much, it's not good, right?

✓ You know, if you depend on your phone too much, it's not good, right?

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; only filler 'uh' removed for clarity. No major grammatical error with pronouns. Suggestion: remove hesitation words to improve fluency.