Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'at the school'. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về mục đích đi thư viện và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library after school with my friends to find books that can help me with my studies.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'read book' nên là 'read books' hoặc 'read a book'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'study' và 'studying a school'.

例: I usually read books or study in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate and relax after a day at school.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách, ví dụ 'didn't go' thay vì 'don't go'. Ngoài ra, từ 'rebook' không phù hợp, có thể bạn muốn nói 'read books'. Hãy làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I had a big collection of books at home, so I used to read books with my sibling and relax.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'play important role' và 'there's always go'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because education plays an important role in their future, so they usually go there to do their homework and study.

× I go with my friends to find the book which can help my study.

✓ I go with my friends to find books which can help my study.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books that can help with study, not just one.

× I usually read book or study in the library because it is very quiet and so I can concentrate and relax after studying a school.

✓ I usually read books or study in the library because it is very quiet and so I can concentrate and relax after studying at school.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books. Also, 'studying a school' is incorrect; it should be 'studying at school' to indicate location.

× I usually read book or study in the library because it is very quiet and so I can concentrate and relax after studying a school.

✓ I usually read books or study in the library because it is very quiet and so I can concentrate and relax after studying at school.

The preposition 'a' before 'school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place where studying happens.

× No, I don't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I have a big book collection in my room so I can rebook with my sibling and relax.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I had a big book collection in my room so I could read books with my siblings and relax.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't go' with past time 'when I was a kid'. It should be past tense 'didn't go'. Also, 'have' should be 'had' to match past time. 'Rebook' is incorrect; it should be 'read books'. 'Sibling' should be plural 'siblings' if referring to more than one.

× No, I don't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I have a big book collection in my room so I can rebook with my sibling and relax.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I had a big book collection in my room so I could read books with my siblings and relax.

The word 'sibling' should be plural 'siblings' if referring to more than one brother or sister.

× No, I don't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I have a big book collection in my room so I can rebook with my sibling and relax.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I had a big book collection in my room so I could read books with my siblings and relax.

The modal verbs 'can' should be changed to 'could' to match the past tense context.

× No, I don't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I have a big book collection in my room so I can rebook with my sibling and relax.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at my home I had a big book collection in my room so I could read books with my siblings and relax.

The modal verb 'can' is used incorrectly for past ability; it should be 'could'.

× So there's always go the library to practice the home practice work, practice homework.

✓ So they always go to the library to practice their homework.

'There's' (there is) is incorrect here; it should be 'they' as the subject. 'Home practice work' is awkward and redundant; 'homework' is sufficient. Also, 'practice homework' is better than 'practice the home practice work'.

× So there's always go the library to practice the home practice work, practice homework.

✓ So they always go to the library to practice their homework.

The pronoun 'there's' is incorrect; it should be 'they' to refer to Chinese kids.

× So there's always go the library to practice the home practice work, practice homework.

✓ So they always go to the library to practice their homework.

The phrase 'go the library' is missing the preposition 'to'.