Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Та илүү тодорхой, байгалийн хэллэг ашиглан хариултаа сайжруулах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer other activities over reading books." гэж хэлж болно.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer spending my free time outdoors or with friends rather than reading books.

提案: Хариулт тань ойлгомжгүй, давтагдсан үг их байна. Илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос ашиглан хариултаа сайжруулна уу. Жишээ нь, "I usually read books in the library, but I don't go there often because I prefer other places."

例: I usually read books in the library when I visit, but I don't go there often because I prefer studying at home.

提案: Өнгөрсөн цагийг зөв ашиглаж, илүү тодорхой хариулт өгнө үү. Жишээ нь, "No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing with toys."

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing with toys and spending time outside.

提案: Хариулт тань илүү тодорхой, холбогч үг ашигласан байх хэрэгтэй. Мөн "intelligent and smart people" гэдэг нь ерөнхийлсөн бөгөөд илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар өгнө үү. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and improve their knowledge."

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and improve their knowledge because education is highly valued in China.

× No, I don't very often go to Libra because I don't like to read a book.

✓ No, I don't go to the library very often because I don't like to read books.

The adverb 'very often' should be placed after the verb phrase 'go to the library' for correct word order. Also, 'Libra' is likely a typo for 'library', and 'a book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally.

× No, I don't very often go to Libra because I don't like to read a book.

✓ No, I don't go to the library very often because I don't like to read books.

The preposition 'to' is correctly used with 'go', but the noun 'Libra' is incorrect; it should be 'library'. Also, 'a book' should be plural 'books' when referring to reading in general.

× I often read in a book but I don't like.

✓ I often read books, but I don't like it.

The phrase 'read in a book' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'read books'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'I don't like' should be followed by an object or explanation.

× I don't often go really often go to library because I don't like a little.

✓ I don't really often go to the library because I don't like it much.

The adverb placement is incorrect and redundant ('don't often go really often go'). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the', and 'like a little' is incorrect; 'like it much' is appropriate.

× I don't go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The past tense is required here because the action happened in the past. 'Don't' is present tense and should be changed to 'didn't'.

× When I was a kid. I like playing toys.

✓ When I was a kid, I liked playing with toys.

The first part is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the second part with a comma. Also, 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the time frame, and 'playing toys' should be 'playing with toys'.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids usually go to the library because they are very intelligent and smart people and are usually study and practice.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids usually go to the library because they are very intelligent and smart and usually study and practice there.

The phrase 'are usually study and practice' is incorrect; it should be 'usually study and practice'. Also, 'people' is unnecessary after 'intelligent and smart', and adding 'there' clarifies the location of study and practice.