Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь трохи незрозуміла і містить граматичні помилки. Спробуйте давати чітку і коротку відповідь, уникаючи зайвих слів, і використовуйте правильні часи дієслів.

例: I sometimes go to the library when I want to read books that are not available in the bookshop.

提案: Ваша відповідь містить помилки у словах і граматиці, а також відсутні зв'язки між реченнями. Намагайтеся використовувати правильні слова і додавати зв'язки для кращої логіки.

例: Usually, I borrow the books I want and then go home. I really like the quiet atmosphere in the library because it helps me concentrate.

提案: Ваша відповідь не є чіткою і містить граматичні помилки. Намагайтеся відповідати прямо і використовувати правильні форми дієслів.

例: I don't remember exactly, but I think I went to the library at school to borrow books when I needed them.

提案: Ваша відповідь має граматичні помилки і не дуже чітка. Використовуйте правильні часи і структуру речень, а також уникайте зайвих слів.

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library when they want to borrow books or attend events.

× Actually sometimes, but not really often if I want to read a few books and I didn't see them at the bookshop so I got to the library.

✓ Actually sometimes, but not really often. If I want to read a few books and I don't see them at the bookshop, I go to the library.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the question is about habitual actions, present tense should be used consistently. 'Didn't see' and 'got' should be 'don't see' and 'go' to match the habitual present tense context.

× Actually mostly I just take poke which I wanted and then go home, but I really really like how it quiet in that place.

✓ Actually, mostly I just take the book which I want and then go home, but I really really like how quiet it is in that place.

The word 'poke' is incorrect; it should be 'book'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense. The phrase 'how it quiet' is missing the verb 'is'. The correct form is 'how quiet it is'.

× Uh, I don't remember. Probably in school I were going to the library, but only what I needed are books.

✓ Uh, I don't remember. Probably in school I was going to the library, but only when I needed books.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. Also, 'only what I needed are books' is awkward; it should be 'only when I needed books' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I think, of course, like every kid, they're going to library when they wanted some book or to be at some event.

✓ I think, of course, like every kid, they go to the library when they want some book or to be at some event.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the question is about habitual actions, present tense should be used consistently. 'They're going' should be 'they go', and 'wanted' should be 'want'. Also, 'going library' is missing the article 'the' before 'library'.