Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ như 'go to there' nên là 'go there', và từ 'fighting' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I often go to the library to read books, study, or sometimes just to hang out with my friends.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'go to there' nên là 'go there', và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh ở cuối. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng hoàn thiện câu và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I usually go to the library to read books because it is a quiet place where I can focus without distractions.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nói rõ ràng, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

例: To be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. The first time I went there was when I was 12 years old.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'Chinese kid' nên là 'Chinese kids'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library about three times a week because their parents encourage them to do so.

× Actually I very often go to there to read books, fighting, or just go there with my friends.

✓ Actually, I very often go there to read books, fight, or just go there with my friends.

The preposition 'to' before 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Go there' is the correct phrase. Also, 'fighting' should be 'fight' to match the parallel structure with 'read books' and 'go there'.

× I usually go to there to read books because it's a quiet place where I free from distractions and.

✓ I usually go there to read books because it's a quiet place where I am free from distractions.

The preposition 'to' before 'there' is incorrect; it should be omitted. Also, the sentence was incomplete and missing the verb 'am' in 'I am free'. The conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× To be honestly, I know no I I when I was a kid, I I can't go to library.

✓ To be honest, I know that when I was a kid, I couldn't go to the library.

The phrase 'To be honestly' is incorrect; it should be 'To be honest'. The sentence has repeated words and lacks clarity. 'I know no I I' is incorrect and should be 'I know that'. 'I can't go to library' should be in past tense 'I couldn't go to the library' and include the article 'the' before 'library'.

× The first time I go to there is when I 12 years old.

✓ The first time I went there was when I was 12 years old.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time reference. 'To there' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. Also, 'is' should be 'was' to agree with past tense. The phrase 'I 12 years old' is missing the verb 'was'.

× I'm Vietnamese kids and I guess that Chinese kid have to go there three times a week because they their parents tell them to do that.

✓ I'm a Vietnamese kid and I guess that Chinese kids have to go there three times a week because their parents tell them to do that.

'I'm Vietnamese kids' is incorrect because 'I'm' is singular and 'kids' is plural; it should be 'I'm a Vietnamese kid'. 'Chinese kid have' should be 'Chinese kids have' to agree in number. 'They their parents' is redundant; 'their parents' is sufficient.