Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'is have a high facility and update' nên được sửa thành 'has good facilities and is well updated'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ hợp lý.

例: No, I don't often go to the library. Although my university library has good facilities and many new books, I find it quite boring to spend time there.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi hiện tại và tránh dùng thì quá khứ không liên quan. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có liên kết logic hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thói quen hiện tại hoặc lý do bạn không thường xuyên đến thư viện.

例: I usually go to the library to study quietly and borrow books for my courses. However, recently I haven't been going much because I prefer studying at home.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho các hành động trong quá khứ và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to borrow books to improve my knowledge. However, I didn't like the strict rules because I enjoyed eating and drinking while studying.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

例: I think Chinese children often go to the library because they have to study a lot and read traditional books to learn about their history and culture.

× No, I don't often go to the library, although the library in my university is have a high facility and update and it's updated by many new books, but I found it quite boring.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library, although the library in my university has high-quality facilities and is updated with many new books, but I find it quite boring.

The phrase 'is have' is incorrect; 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has'. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match the context. 'Update' is incorrectly used; it should be 'is updated with' to indicate ongoing updates. Also, 'found' should be 'find' to maintain present tense consistency.

× When I was a secondary and high school student, I went to the library to borrow books to improve my knowledge. But since I study in the university, I didn't go to the library. It happened.

✓ When I was a secondary and high school student, I went to the library to borrow books to improve my knowledge. But since I started studying at the university, I haven't gone to the library.

The phrase 'since I study in the university' is incorrect because 'since' requires present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. 'Didn't go' should be 'haven't gone' to reflect this. 'It happened' is unnecessary and unclear here.

× As I said that when I was a child, I usually went to the library to borrow a book because I want to improve my knowledge, but I was not really keen on the strict regulation of the library.

✓ As I said, when I was a child, I usually went to the library to borrow books because I wanted to improve my knowledge, but I was not really keen on the strict regulations of the library.

'A book' should be plural 'books' to match 'usually' implying multiple occasions. 'Want' should be past tense 'wanted' to match past context. 'Regulation' should be plural 'regulations' as libraries typically have multiple rules.

× I love to eat and drink while studying.

✓ I loved to eat and drink while studying.

To maintain past tense consistency with the previous sentence, 'love' should be 'loved'. No preposition error here, but tense consistency is important.

× I think the deal is I know that Chinese children have to learn a lot and read many traditional books to know about their historical. Knowledge.

✓ I think the deal is that I know Chinese children have to learn a lot and read many traditional books to learn about their history and knowledge.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'The deal is I know' is awkward; adding 'that' improves clarity. 'Historical. Knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'history and knowledge' to form a coherent phrase.