Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用更多连接词和丰富句型，使回答更自然。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because there is one near my house, so I usually visit it once or twice a week to study and read.

提案: 回答中出现了中英文混杂，影响表达的清晰和自然。建议用完整的英文句子回答，避免中英文混用，并且注意时态一致。

例: I usually read books and prepare for my exams. Sometimes, I also do programming work because my major is related to programming, so I need to use library resources to study.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更准确流畅。

例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mum always took me to a big library in the city centre. Because of that, I have kept the habit of going to the library regularly.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且部分表达不够准确。建议分句表达，注意动词形式一致，使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents believe that developing good reading habits is essential for their overall development. This helps improve their concentration and imagination, so visiting the library is quite common.

× I usually just read books and prepared for my exams like or do some bian Cheng gong zuo yin Wei wo xue XI de join ye Shi you Guan bian Cheng de suo Yi wo Xu Yao jie jiu tu Shu Guan zi liao Lai xue.

✓ I usually just read books and prepare for my exams or do some programming work because my studies are related to programming, so I need to use library materials to learn.

句子中“prepared”使用了过去式，但句子描述的是经常性的动作，应使用一般现在时“prepare”。此外，句子中夹杂了中文和拼音，应改为完整的英文表达。

× Yes, there is a big library in our city centre, my mum always take me there and that's why I think that's why I still kept the hobby to frequently or regularly go to the library now still.

✓ Yes, there was a big library in our city centre. My mum always took me there, and that's why I think I still have the hobby of frequently or regularly going to the library now.

描述过去时应使用过去式“was”和“took”，而不是现在时“is”和“take”。此外，“kept the hobby”表达不当，应改为“have the hobby”。

× my mum always take me there

✓ My mum always takes me there

主语“my mum”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“takes”。

× that's why I still kept the hobby to frequently or regularly go to the library now still.

✓ that's why I still have the hobby of frequently or regularly going to the library now.

“go”应使用动名词形式“going”作为介词“of”的宾语。

× this strengthens their concentration and develop a good imagination, so as a result, it is a common.

✓ this strengthens their concentration and develops a good imagination, so as a result, it is common.

主语“this”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“develops”。此外，“a common”后缺少名词，应去掉冠词或补充名词。