Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“make me can rebook”不符合英语习惯，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

例: I rarely go to the library now because I have an e-book device that allows me to read books conveniently at home. However, when I was a child, I often visited the library to borrow books I wanted to read.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“observing people in library”，“everyone have”等，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Besides reading books, I often observe people in the library. It's interesting because everyone has their own preferences and habits when choosing books.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，句子不完整且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并避免重复和断句错误。

例: Yes, I went to the library very often when I was a kid, almost every day. I was quite introverted back then, so I preferred reading to socializing.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（如“funny cats”），句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议使用准确词汇，理清句子结构，清晰表达观点。

例: No, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library. The main reason is that they have too many subjects to study and memorize, so they don't have much free time.

× Besides reading books, I actually often observing people in library.

✓ Besides reading books, I actually often observe people in the library.

动词observe在此句中应使用原形observe，因为前面有副词often修饰，表示经常发生的动作，不能用现在分词observing。

× It's funny and fascinating like because everyone have their own preference and habits when they choosing books.

✓ It's funny and fascinating because everyone has their own preferences and habits when they choose books.

主语everyone是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has；preferences应为复数形式；动词choose应为原形，因为前面有when引导的时间状语从句。

× Yes, I went to library very often when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library very often when I was a kid.

library前应加定冠词the，表示特指图书馆。

× I'm literally on a daily basis and when I was a kid I am relatively introvert.

✓ I went literally on a daily basis and when I was a kid I was relatively introverted.

句子描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去时；形容词introvert应改为过去分词形式introverted，表示性格特征。

× I did not. I just like communicating or chatting with.

✓ I did not. I just didn't like communicating or chatting with others.

句子不完整，缺少宾语；应补充宾语others，并保持时态一致。

× No, I don't think funny cats often often go to the library.

✓ No, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library.

原句中funny cats明显是错误的词汇，应为Chinese kids；kids为复数形式，符合语境。

× The biggest reason is that there are too many things in textbooks that we need to learn and need to memorize that cause many times, so we don't have time.

✓ The biggest reason is that there are too many things in textbooks that we need to learn and memorize, which takes a lot of time, so we don't have time.

原句中that cause many times表达不清，应改为which takes a lot of time，更符合英语表达习惯。