Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và sửa lỗi về danh từ số nhiều và động từ nguyên mẫu. Ví dụ: 'I often go to the library to find books and materials to complete my projects.'

例: I often go to the library to find books and materials to complete my projects.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và đồng nhất dạng động từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: 'I often read books and find useful materials to improve my study skills and complete my projects.'

例: I often read books and find useful materials to improve my study skills and complete my projects.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ đơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ: 'No, I didn't. I didn't like reading books when I was a kid. Instead, I preferred watching videos and playing outside with friends to learn new things.'

例: No, I didn't. I didn't like reading books when I was a kid. Instead, I preferred watching videos and playing outside with friends to learn new things.

提案: Bạn trả lời trung thực nhưng câu trả lời có thể tự nhiên hơn và đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng số nhiều cho 'kids' và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Ví dụ: 'Actually, I am Vietnamese, so I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library.'

例: Actually, I am Vietnamese, so I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library.

× Yes, I really go to a library to find book and materials to completing my project.

✓ Yes, I really go to the library to find books and materials to complete my project.

The article 'a' should be 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to match the plural 'materials'. 'Completing' should be the base form 'complete' after 'to' which requires the base verb form.

× I often read a book and finding some useful material to improve my study skill and completing my project.

✓ I often read books and find some useful materials to improve my study skills and complete my project.

Use plural 'books' and 'materials' to indicate general items. 'Finding' should be 'find' to maintain parallel structure with 'read'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match general meaning. 'Completing' should be 'complete' after 'to'.

× No, I didn't you too.

✓ No, I didn't either.

The phrase 'didn't you too' is incorrect. The correct negative agreement is 'didn't either' to express the same meaning.

× I don't like to read a book so much and I love to watch a video and go to outside to fighting some friend to know more knowledge.

✓ I don't like to read books very much and I love to watch videos and go outside to fight with some friends to gain more knowledge.

Use plural 'books' and 'videos' for general statements. 'Go to outside' is incorrect; correct is 'go outside'. 'Fighting' should be base form 'fight' after 'to'. 'Some friend' should be plural 'some friends'. 'To know more knowledge' is better expressed as 'to gain more knowledge'.