Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about your activities. For example, say "Yes, I usually go to the library once a week on weekends to practice languages."

例: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week on weekends to practice languages, especially in the last few days before exams.

提案: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you do. For example, "My friends and I get together in the library to practice different languages because we come from various countries."

例: My friends and I get together in the library to practice different languages because we come from various countries, which helps us improve our speaking skills.

提案: Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. Avoid filler words and be more specific. For example, "Yes, when I was a kid, I went to the library to use the computers because I was fascinated by playing games and learning how to use them."

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library to use the computers because I was fascinated by playing games and learning new things on them.

提案: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and avoid ambiguity. For example, "I haven't seen many Chinese kids at the library, but I often see African and native kids playing together."

例: I haven't seen many Chinese kids at the library, but I often see African and native kids playing and studying together there.

× Yes, I do really.

✓ Yes, I really do.

The adverb 'really' should be placed before the auxiliary verb 'do' in this sentence to maintain correct adverb placement in English.

× Once in a week in my weekend I used to go to the library and usually the last few days like practice the language.

✓ Once a week on my weekend, I usually go to the library to practice the language in the last few days.

The phrase 'Once in a week' should be 'Once a week' for correct frequency expression. Also, 'practice' should be used as an infinitive verb 'to practice' after 'go to the library'. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Israeli, we do practice our language like with me and with my friends.

✓ In Israel, we practice our language together with my friends and me.

The preposition 'like' is incorrectly used; 'together with' or 'with' is appropriate here. Also, 'Israeli' should be 'In Israel' to indicate location.

× We like get together in library and practices and practice like different kind of language.

✓ We like to get together in the library and practice different kinds of languages.

'Practices' should be 'practice' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. 'Different kind of language' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of languages' to indicate variety.

× Those are coming for different countries.

✓ They come from different countries.

'Those are coming for different countries' is incorrect; 'They come from different countries' correctly uses the pronoun and preposition to indicate origin.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question is in past tense ('Did you go...'), so the answer should also be in past tense using 'did' instead of 'do'.

× Basically when I was a kid on the time I went to library to see the computer and it was my fascination to like playing games with the computers and making some.

✓ Basically, when I was a kid, I went to the library to see the computer, and I was fascinated by playing games on the computer and making some.

The article 'the' is missing before 'library' and 'computer'. Also, 'fascination to like playing' is corrected to 'fascinated by playing' for proper expression.

× I didn't see the Chinese kid over there, but I saw the African kids and and from the native kids, those who are playing with them.

✓ I didn't see any Chinese kids over there, but I saw African kids and native kids who were playing with them.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.