Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'uh' และ 'umm' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'library' แทน 'lively' และอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับความถี่ในการไปห้องสมุดอย่างชัดเจน

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially last year when I visited my friend's school. The library there has a quiet room which I like to use for studying.

提案: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'reading' แทน 'leading' และควรอธิบายกิจกรรมที่ทำในห้องสมุดอย่างชัดเจนและมีรายละเอียดมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

例: Usually, I read fiction or novels in the library. Sometimes, I also enjoy reading cartoons because they are entertaining and help me relax.

提案: คำตอบควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'kid' แทน 'kiss' และ 'library' แทน 'lively' ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และอธิบายเหตุผลหรือประสบการณ์เพิ่มเติมเพื่อเพิ่มความน่าสนใจ

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my school had a library and I needed to study for my subjects there.

提案: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'uh' และ 'I think' ซ้ำๆ ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in China, and they usually work hard to study.

× I think it's uh, last year ago, I go to lively in my friend, but in lively have in the room in the school.

✓ I think it was last year. I went to the library with my friend, but the library has a room in the school.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs 'is' and 'go' when referring to a past event. The correct past tense forms 'was' and 'went' should be used to indicate actions that happened in the past.

× I think it's uh, last year ago, I go to lively in my friend, but in lively have in the room in the school.

✓ I think it was last year. I went to the library with my friend, but the library has a room in the school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my friend' and 'lively'. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate accompaniment, and 'library' is the correct noun instead of 'lively'.

× Actually, I do. In the library I feel sleepy. But sometime I will, leading all the fiction or the novel and the ultra.

✓ Actually, I do. In the library, I feel sleepy. But sometimes I will read all the fiction, novels, and other books.

The word 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'fiction' and 'novel' should be pluralized appropriately, and 'leading' is incorrect here; the verb 'read' fits the context.

× But sometime I will, leading all the fiction or the novel and the ultra.

✓ But sometimes I will read all the fiction, novels, and other books.

The verb 'leading' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'read'. Also, 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form.

× Sometimes it's a cartoon, yeah.

✓ Sometimes it's a cartoon, yeah.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no plural or singular issue detected.

× Oh, when I was a kiss I go to a lively often yeah, because in the school when when I younger I have a subject is.

✓ Oh, when I was a kid, I often went to the library because at school when I was younger, I had a subject.

The sentence uses present tense verbs 'go' and 'have' when referring to past events. The correct past tense forms 'went' and 'had' should be used. Also, 'kiss' is a mispronunciation of 'kid', and 'lively' should be 'library'.

× Oh, when I was a kiss I go to a lively often yeah, because in the school when when I younger I have a subject is.

✓ Oh, when I was a kid, I often went to the library because at school when I was younger, I had a subject.

The preposition 'in' before 'the school' is incorrect; 'at school' is the correct phrase to indicate location in this context.

× I think is, uh, of, I think the Chinese cases are often go to the lively because, uh, in Chinese, uh, this, uh, this country has a, a must, uh, has working hard study.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in China, this country, there is a strong emphasis on working hard and studying.

The word 'cases' should be 'kids' to refer to children. 'Lively' should be 'library'. Also, 'has a must' is incorrect; the sentence is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I think is, uh, of, I think the Chinese cases are often go to the lively because, uh, in Chinese, uh, this, uh, this country has a, a must, uh, has working hard study.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in China, this country, there is a strong emphasis on working hard and studying.

The phrase 'has a must' is incorrect. The correct structure uses 'there is' to indicate existence or emphasis on something.