Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно сказать, что предпочитаете читать дома, но любите посещать книжные магазины, так как там можно выбрать книги разных жанров.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home. However, I like visiting bookshops since they offer a wide variety of books in different categories.

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и содержать связные предложения. Следует использовать связующие слова и объяснять, почему нравится тишина в библиотеке.

例: Usually, I just read books in the library because I prefer a quiet environment. I like it there since it helps me concentrate better.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и по существу. Следует избегать повторений и неуместных выражений. Можно сказать, что в детстве не любили библиотеку, так как предпочитали более активные занятия.

例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I preferred activities like dancing and singing rather than just reading.

提案: Ответ должен быть более уверенным и грамматически правильным. Если не знаете, можно сказать, что не уверены, но предполагаете что-то, используя связующие слова.

例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many of them do because libraries are important for studying.

× No, I didn't like to go Liberty because I prefer stay at home and read the books.

✓ No, I didn't like to go to the library because I preferred to stay at home and read books.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Didn't like' is past tense, so 'prefer' should be 'preferred' to match. Also, 'stay' should be 'to stay' to form the infinitive after 'preferred'. 'Liberty' is likely a typo for 'library'. 'The books' is incorrect here; 'books' without 'the' is better as it refers to books in general.

× No, I didn't like to go Liberty because I prefer stay at home and read the books.

✓ No, I didn't like to go to the library because I preferred to stay at home and read books.

The phrase 'go Liberty' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place.

× But I like book shops because I need books. More than a category.

✓ But I like bookshops because I need books from more than one category.

'More than a category' is unclear and incomplete. It should specify 'more than one category' to indicate variety. Also, 'book shops' is better written as 'bookshops' as one word.

× I think nothing.

✓ I don't do anything.

'I think nothing' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't do anything' or 'I don't think about anything'.

× I read only books and in the library we I prefer be a quiet.

✓ I only read books, and in the library, I prefer it to be quiet.

The phrase 'we I prefer be a quiet' is ungrammatical. It should be 'I prefer it to be quiet' to express preference for quietness in the library.

× I read only books and in the library we I prefer be a quiet.

✓ I only read books, and in the library, I prefer it to be quiet.

The pronouns 'we I' are incorrect and confusing. The sentence should use 'I' consistently.

× No, I don't like library, because in library we can do only reads.

✓ No, I didn't like the library because in the library we could only read.

The question is about the past ('Did you go... when you were a kid?'), so the answer should be in past tense. 'Don't like' should be 'didn't like', and 'can do only reads' should be 'could only read'.

× No, I don't like library, because in library we can do only reads.

✓ No, I didn't like the library because in the library we could only read.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× Nothing, nothing only reads.

✓ Nothing, nothing but reading.

'Only reads' is incorrect; 'reading' is the correct gerund form to express the activity.

× I am powerful human and I like to dance.

✓ I am a powerful person and I like to dance.

'Human' is a noun but not commonly used to describe oneself; 'person' is more natural. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'powerful person'.

× I like to sing, I like to say.

✓ I like to sing, I like to talk.

'I like to say' is incomplete and unnatural; 'I like to talk' is more appropriate.

× I don't have, I don't have no idea because I don't know, Chinese kids go to the library or not.

✓ I don't have any idea because I don't know whether Chinese kids go to the library or not.

Double negation 'I don't have no idea' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have any idea'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'whether' is needed to introduce the indirect question.