Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve grammar, for example, use 'quiet and calm place' instead of 'quiet and calm places'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' more smoothly and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'.

例: Yes, I often go to the library at least once a week because it provides a quiet and calm place where I can concentrate better on my studies. Sometimes, I also browse for books that interest me.

提案: Try to improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, say 'I usually study there' instead of 'I'm studying at there'. Avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, be more specific about what you study or what information you look for.

例: I usually study at the library because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate better. Sometimes, I use the library's resources, like computers, to find information for my assignments.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. For example, say 'I started going to the library when I was 8 years old'. Avoid repeating words and filler phrases like 'you know'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

例: Yes, I started going to the library when I was 8 years old because my elder sister often went there to borrow novels and storybooks for our family to read in the evening.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Use plural forms correctly, for example, 'Chinese kids' and 'most kids'. Avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words like 'not only... but also' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library. Not only Chinese kids, but also children all around the world spend time there reading books they like or studying in groups from a young age.

× You know, library can help me have a higher concentration for study because it's a quiet and calm places, so I love to go there.

✓ You know, the library can help me have a higher concentration for study because it's a quiet and calm place, so I love to go there.

The word 'library' is singular and should be preceded by 'the' to specify it. Also, 'places' should be singular 'place' to agree with the singular subject 'library'. This correction ensures subject-verb and noun agreement.

× Usually I'm studying at there, you know I love to study at library as is quiet, then I can concentrate more on my study.

✓ Usually I'm studying there, you know I love to study at the library as it is quiet, then I can concentrate more on my study.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'there'; 'there' does not need a preposition. Also, 'at library' should be 'at the library' to specify the place. 'As is quiet' should be 'as it is quiet' to include the subject 'it' for clarity.

× Sometime I just go there use the library, you know library resources like computer to find information.

✓ Sometimes I just go there to use the library, you know, library resources like computers to find information.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'go there use the library' is missing 'to' before 'use' to indicate purpose. Also, 'computer' should be plural 'computers' to match the plural 'resources'.

× Yes, I started to go library when I remember when I was 8 years old, I followed my elder sister go to library because she used she always go to there and rent a novel or storybook, you know, for us and for the whole family in the evening.

✓ Yes, I started to go to the library when I remember I was 8 years old. I followed my elder sister to the library because she always went there and rented a novel or storybook, you know, for us and for the whole family in the evening.

The phrase 'go library' should be 'go to the library' to use the correct preposition and article. 'Go to there' is incorrect; 'there' does not need 'to'. Also, past tense verbs 'went' and 'rented' are needed to match the past time frame. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I think they do, you know, not only Chinese kid and I, I think most of the kid all around the world often go to library, spends the time there, read the book that they like, you know, or they go there to study at a group even when they were young.

✓ I think they do, you know, not only Chinese kids but also I think most kids all around the world often go to the library, spend time there, read the books that they like, you know, or they go there to study in a group even when they were young.

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to match 'most kids'. 'Go to library' should be 'go to the library' with the definite article. 'Spends' should be 'spend' to agree with plural subject. 'Read the book' should be 'read the books' to match plural context. 'Study at a group' should be 'study in a group' for correct preposition.