Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“it provide”应为“it provides”，且表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment for studying. Sometimes, I go with my friends to work on our programs together.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“borrow in the new books”应为“borrow new books”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually borrow new books from the library because it's cheaper than buying them. Also, I do my homework and projects there since I can concentrate better on my assignments.

提案: 时态使用不准确，“take”应为“took”，且句子中有重复“there”。建议注意时态一致性和避免重复。

例: When I was a kid, my parents usually took me to the library once a week. I could find news stories and comic books to read there.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“will then to the library”不正确。建议理清句子结构，使用完整句子表达观点。

例: Chinese kids often go to the library. Their parents take them there to study or read. They also encourage their children to do research in the library.

× Yes, I usually go to the libraries because it provide a quiet environment for me to study and I sometimes go there with my good members which can't which we can't studied our programs here.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the libraries because they provide a quiet environment for me to study and I sometimes go there with my good friends with whom we can't study our programs here.

这里的 'libraries' 是复数，主语应使用复数代词 'they'，而不是单数 'it'。另外，'members' 用法不当，应改为 'friends'，且关系代词使用错误，应使用 'with whom'。

× Yes, I usually go to the libraries because it provide a quiet environment for me to study and I sometimes go there with my good members which can't which we can't studied our programs here.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the libraries because they provide a quiet environment for me to study and I sometimes go there with my good friends with whom we can't study our programs here.

'studied' 是过去式或过去分词，句中应使用动词原形 'study'，因为前面有情态动词 'can't'，情态动词后应接动词原形。

× I usually borrow in the new books there because it's cheaper for me to buy it and I also do my homework and project there because I can concentrate it on my assignment better.

✓ I usually borrow new books there because it's cheaper for me than to buy them and I also do my homework and projects there because I can concentrate better on my assignments.

'borrow in the new books' 中 'in' 不应出现，应直接说 'borrow new books'。另外，'project' 应为复数 'projects'，'assignment' 也应为复数 'assignments'，且 'concentrate it on' 结构错误，应为 'concentrate on'。

× When I was a kid, my parents usually take me to the library once a week. There I can find some news stories and comic books there.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents usually took me to the library once a week. There I could find some news stories and comic books.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式，'take' 应改为 'took'。另外，'can' 表示现在能力，描述过去应使用过去式 'could'。

× Chinese kids usually go to the libraries. Their parents will then to the library for study or just reading and school. Also encourage them to do the research in the libraries.

✓ Chinese kids usually go to the libraries. Their parents will then go to the library to study or just read and attend school. They also encourage them to do research in the libraries.

'will then to the library' 缺少动词，应为 'will then go to the library'。'for study or just reading and school' 结构混乱，应改为 'to study or just read and attend school'。'do the research' 中 'the' 不必要，应为 'do research'。