Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence first, then add supporting details. Avoid starting with conjunctions like 'And'. Also, use more natural phrasing such as 'I don't often go to the library because...'.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer writing books online, which I find more convenient and flexible.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct tense and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain with details.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read my favourite books, especially special editions. However, I prefer reading books online because it's more accessible.

提案: Good direct answer with reasons. To improve, avoid informal words like 'reboot' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: To be honest, I don't remember going to the library often as a child because I preferred staying at home to play games. I found the library less interesting compared to other activities.

提案: Avoid vague or inaccurate generalisations. Answer the question directly with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and vocabulary relevant to the context.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage reading to improve their knowledge and skills.

× And not really, because I don't like to spend too much time there.

✓ Not really, because I don't like to spend too much time there.

The use of 'And' at the beginning of the sentence is unnecessary and informal in this context. Removing it improves sentence clarity and formality.

× I prefer to write books online.

✓ I prefer to write books on the internet.

The preposition 'on' is more appropriate when referring to activities done using the internet or websites, rather than 'online' as an adverb here.

× When I got there, I usually read the special book, my favorite book, but not often.

✓ When I go there, I usually read a special book, my favourite book, but not often.

The phrase 'When I got there' incorrectly uses past tense with 'usually', which indicates habitual action. Present tense 'go' fits better to express habitual actions.

× I prefer to read books from website.

✓ I prefer to read books from a website.

The singular countable noun 'website' requires an article. 'A' is appropriate here as it refers to any website, not a specific one.

× I usually prefer to stay at home and reboot or play games.

✓ I usually prefer to stay at home and rest or play games.

The verb 'reboot' is incorrectly used here; 'rest' is the correct verb to express relaxing at home.

× I think I found the library a bit boring compared to the other activities.

✓ I think I found the library a bit boring compared to other activities.

The definite article 'the' before 'other activities' is unnecessary because it refers to activities in general, not specific ones.

× I think that one is 100% true because all the Chinese people are smart and improve your skill to doing something.

✓ I think that is 100% true because all Chinese people are smart and improve their skills at doing something.

'That one' is better as 'that' to refer to the statement. 'Chinese people' does not need 'the'. 'Your skill' should be 'their skills' to agree with the plural subject. 'To doing' is incorrect; 'at doing' is the correct prepositional phrase.