Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "reading newspapers, reading novels"; instead, say "reading newspapers and novels." Also, the phrase "I'm doing this and now" is awkward; you can say "I have been doing this since my childhood." Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library every evening to read newspapers and novels. I have enjoyed this habit since my childhood because it helps me relax and learn new things.

提案: Your answer covers the main points but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more coherent. For example, say "I read newspapers in different languages, including English, Kannada, and Hindi, which is my local language." Use linking words like "after that" properly to connect sentences. Also, avoid repeating "I enjoy reading newspapers" twice; instead, combine ideas for fluency.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read newspapers in different languages, such as English, Kannada, and Hindi, which is my local language. After that, I enjoy reading novels to relax.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Instead of "I was going to library," say "I used to go to the library." Also, you can add linking words to make the answer smoother, for example, "During my school days, I used to enjoy reading various types of books, such as stories, novels, and crime thrillers."

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid. During my school days, I enjoyed reading different types of books, including stories, novels, and crime thrillers.

提案: Your answer shows honesty but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correcting errors. For example, say "I don't know much about the Chinese education system, but I believe Chinese students also visit libraries regularly to study and read various materials like stories, novels, and newspapers." Avoid incorrect phrases like "crime pillars." Use linking words like "however" properly to connect ideas.

例: I don't know much about the Chinese education system. However, I believe that Chinese students also visit libraries regularly to study and enjoy reading stories, novels, and newspapers.

× Yes, I usually go to the library every day in the evening time to spend time in reading newspapers, reading novels, and I enjoy reading this.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library every day in the evening to spend time reading newspapers and novels, and I enjoy this.

The phrase 'spend time in reading' is incorrect; the verb 'spend' should be followed directly by the gerund form without 'in'. Also, 'reading newspapers, reading novels' is repetitive; it is better to say 'reading newspapers and novels'. This improves sentence fluency and correctness.

× Since my childhood I'm doing this and now.

✓ I have been doing this since my childhood and continue to do so now.

The present continuous tense 'I'm doing' is incorrect here because the action started in the past and continues to the present. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been doing' correctly expresses this ongoing action from past to present.

× Whenever I go to library, I read a newspapers in different languages including English, Kannada and Hindi of belonging to local language.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I read newspapers in different languages including English, Kannada, and Hindi, which belong to the local languages.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'a newspapers' is incorrect because 'newspapers' is plural and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'of belonging to local language' is awkward and corrected to 'which belong to the local languages' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Whenever I go to library, I read a newspapers in different languages including English, Kannada and Hindi of belonging to local language.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I read newspapers in different languages including English, Kannada, and Hindi, which belong to the local languages.

The word 'newspapers' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'language' should be plural 'languages' to match the multiple languages listed.

× After that I start reading novels.

✓ After that, I start to read novels.

The verb 'start' can be followed by either the infinitive or gerund form. However, 'start to read' is more formal and appropriate here. Adding a comma after 'After that' improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I I was going to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'was going' suggests a continuous action in the past, but 'used to go' better expresses a habitual action in the past. Also, 'to library' needs the article 'the'.

× Yes, I I was going to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× During my school days I used to enjoy reading books of different types like stories, novels, crime thrillers.

✓ During my school days, I used to enjoy reading books of different types like stories, novels, and crime thrillers.

Adding a comma after 'During my school days' improves readability. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list is necessary for correct list punctuation.

× However, I think that even Chinese students go to library regularly for studying, reading and enjoying the various stories, novels, crime pillars, reading newspapers.

✓ However, I think that even Chinese students go to the library regularly for studying, reading, and enjoying various stories, novels, crime thrillers, and reading newspapers.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'crime pillars' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'crime thrillers'. Commas are added for correct list punctuation.