Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural English expressions and correct grammar. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because I don't have time." Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer more complete and engaging.

例: I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule with work and studies. However, when I do visit, I enjoy reading magazines and borrowing books.

提案: Avoid sounding dismissive or rhetorical. Instead, answer directly with a topic sentence and add supporting details using linking words. For example, explain what you do specifically in the library.

例: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful environment. Additionally, I sometimes use the computers there to do research.

提案: Improve sentence structure and add linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, say "Yes, I used to go to the library more often when I was a child because I loved reading and had more free time."

例: Yes, I used to visit the library frequently as a child because I loved reading storybooks. Moreover, I had plenty of free time after school to enjoy reading.

提案: Try to avoid hesitation and give a more confident and structured answer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

例: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly. For instance, some of my friends visit the library often to study and borrow books.

× Unfortunately I don't go often a library because I don't have time for it.

✓ Unfortunately I don't often go to the library because I don't have time for it.

The phrase 'go often a library' is incorrect because the verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'often' should be placed before the verb 'go' for correct adverb placement. The correct phrase is 'go to the library' and 'I don't often go to the library'.

× In the library everyone reads books, so where else can I do there?

✓ In the library everyone reads books, so where else can I do that?

The word 'there' is incorrectly used here. 'There' refers to a place, but the intended meaning is to refer to the activity previously mentioned. The correct pronoun is 'that' to refer to the action of reading books. Therefore, 'where else can I do that?' is correct.

× Yes, when I was a kid I went to library more often. I loved reading books and I had enough time for books.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to the library more often. I loved reading books and I had enough time for books.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× Umm, my friends, uh, go to library very often.

✓ Umm, my friends, uh, go to the library very often.

Similar to the previous correction, 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is a grammatical error.