Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite good but try to avoid incomplete sentences and add a concluding sentence to make it more natural and effective. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" properly to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I often go to the library because it offers a wide range of books and a quiet environment. This helps me concentrate better than when I study online. For example, last week I spent a few hours there preparing for my exams, which improved my focus and understanding.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

例: In the library, I usually study and do research. I like to read books and use the internet to find information for my school projects.

提案: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: I used to go to the library when I was a child because I loved reading different books and learning new things. The library was like a paradise for me. Sometimes, I went there once a week with my parents or friends.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Try to understand the question and respond clearly with relevant information. Use simple sentences and correct grammar.

例: I am from Cambodia, and in my country, many kids often go to the library because it is convenient for getting information and learning. I think Chinese kids also like to go to the library to study and read books.

× I'm in the library, I usually touch in choir studying and research it.

✓ When I'm in the library, I usually study and do research quietly.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect structure, making it difficult to understand. 'Touch in choir' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× I love reading different book and learning a new thing so the library was like a paradise for me.

✓ I love reading different books and learning new things, so the library was like a paradise for me.

The nouns 'book' and 'thing' should be plural ('books' and 'things') because the speaker refers to multiple items. Using singular forms here is incorrect when talking about more than one.

× I used to go there as asleep around a week with my parents or my friend.

✓ I used to go there for about a week with my parents or my friends.

The phrase 'as asleep around a week' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'for about a week' to express duration properly and changes 'friend' to 'friends' to match the plural context.

× Or sorry, I'll come from Cambodia and and when Cambodia Cambodia kid often to go to the library and convenience of information education.

✓ Sorry, I come from Cambodia, and Cambodian kids often go to the library because it is convenient for accessing educational information.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, properly expressing the intended meaning.