Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You need to answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add some details about your library visits. For example, mention how often you go and what you do there.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, usually once or twice a week. I like to borrow books and find a quiet place to study. It helps me concentrate better than at home.

提案: Again, avoid repeating the question. Provide a direct answer with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: In the library, I usually read books or study for my exams. Sometimes, I also use the computers to do research because the internet there is fast and reliable.

提案: Don't repeat the question. Answer it directly and add some specific details about your childhood experience with libraries to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid. My parents often took me there to borrow storybooks, which helped me develop a love for reading early on.

提案: Instead of repeating the question, give your opinion with reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer flow naturally.

例: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library, especially those who enjoy reading or need a quiet place to study. However, some might prefer using digital resources at home nowadays.

× Do you often go to the library?

✓ Yes, I often go to the library.

The student's response repeats the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error because the response lacks a verb and subject that answer the question. The student should provide a statement that directly answers the question, such as 'Yes, I often go to the library.'

× What do you usually do in the library?

✓ I usually read books or study in the library.

The student repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it, which is a sentence structure error. The response should be a statement describing activities done in the library, for example, 'I usually read books or study in the library.'

× Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

Repeating the question instead of answering it is a sentence structure error. The student should respond with a past tense statement that answers the question, such as 'Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.'

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library.

The student repeats the question instead of providing an answer, which is a sentence structure error. The response should be a statement that answers the question, for example, 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library.'