Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and making sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a great place to gain knowledge and explore various books. Since I love reading, I usually spend time there to discover new materials.

提案: Your answer provides good details but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make the response more coherent. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more concise.

例: Typically, I explore different books in the library. For example, I recently came across 'Crime and Punishment,' which I really enjoyed. I usually read alone but sometimes I explore books with my friends as well.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child. My parents often took me there and gave me children's books. I learned about animals, places, and many other interesting topics through those books.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'from the Solute' and be specific about the reasons.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to gain knowledge. They use the library to learn about various subjects, including environmental issues, which helps them understand the world better.

× the library is one of the place where you can gain knowledge

✓ the library is one of the places where you can gain knowledge

The phrase 'one of the place' is incorrect because 'one of the' must be followed by a plural noun. Here, 'place' should be pluralized to 'places' to match the structure.

× Recently I come across the book called is Crime and Punishment and I love that book.

✓ Recently I came across the book called Crime and Punishment and I love that book.

The verb 'come' should be in the past tense 'came' to correctly indicate a completed action in the past. Also, 'called is' is incorrect; 'called' should be directly followed by the book title.

× My mom and dad used to take me to the library and they used to give me some kind of books that usually has was kind of children books.

✓ My mom and dad used to take me to the library and they used to give me some kinds of books that usually were kinds of children's books.

The phrase 'some kind of books' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also, 'has was kind of children books' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'were kinds of children's books' to agree in number and tense.

× So from the Solute they are basically going to have this knowledge about the books and they used to go to the library to get the knowledge to get the environmental issues knowledge through the library.

✓ So from the start they are basically going to have this knowledge about the books and they used to go to the library to get knowledge about environmental issues through the library.

The phrase 'from the Solute' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse; it should be 'from the start'. Also, 'get the environmental issues knowledge' is awkward; it should be 'get knowledge about environmental issues'. Prepositions need to be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.