Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "Luxury" kelimesi yerine "well-equipped" veya "comfortable" gibi daha uygun kelimeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar ekleyin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because in Turkey, libraries are well-equipped with everything I need for studying. Since I am in high school, I use the library regularly to prepare for my exams.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler mevcut. "Studying to my exams" yerine "studying for my exams" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "lousy place" ifadesi yerine "noisy place" daha uygun olur. Cümlenizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirin ve gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın.

例: I usually go to the library to study for my exams because I prefer a quiet environment. I find it hard to concentrate in noisy places, so the library is ideal for me.

提案: Cümle yapılarınızda eksiklikler ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Taking me and my brother to library for" ifadesi tamamlanmamış. Ayrıca, "used to library" yerine "used to going to the library" demelisiniz. Cümlelerinizi tam ve anlamlı yapmaya özen gösterin.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mom used to take me and my brother to the library to read books and do research. Because of that, I am used to going there and I really enjoy it.

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Go to there" ifadesi yanlış, "go there" yeterlidir. Ayrıca, "All the people do that so" ifadesi anlamsal olarak zayıf. Daha net ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

例: Actually, I am not sure because I am not Chinese and I don't know much about their habits. However, I think Chinese kids probably go to the library to study for their exams, as many students do around the world.

× Yes, actually, I love the library because in Turkey the libraries are very luxury and they put all of the things you need when you were studying.

✓ Yes, actually, I love the library because in Turkey the libraries are very luxurious and they have all the things you need when you are studying.

The adjective 'luxury' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective form is 'luxurious' to describe the libraries. Also, 'put all of the things' is awkward; 'have all the things' is more appropriate. Additionally, the tense 'when you were studying' should be present continuous 'when you are studying' to match the general statement.

× I often go there for studying to my exams.

✓ I often go there to study for my exams.

The phrase 'for studying to my exams' is incorrect. The verb 'study' should be in the base form after 'to' (infinitive), and the preposition 'for' should precede 'my exams' to indicate purpose.

× I love studying in quiet.

✓ I love studying in quiet places.

The word 'quiet' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun here. It should be 'quiet places' or 'quiet environments' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I can't focus in a lousy place, so I really love going there and you know.

✓ I can't focus in a noisy place, so I really love going there, you know.

The adjective 'lousy' is informal and less appropriate here; 'noisy' better describes a distracting environment. Also, 'and you know' is unnecessary and can be simplified to 'you know' for natural speech.

× Yes, my mom was taking me and my brother to library for.

✓ Yes, my mom used to take me and my brother to the library.

The phrase 'to library for' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to the library'. Also, 'was taking' suggests a continuous past action; 'used to take' better expresses habitual past action.

× Reading books and doing research so I'm used to library.

✓ We used to read books and do research there, so I'm used to the library.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper conjunctions. Adding 'We used to' clarifies the subject and verb, and 'there' specifies the location. Also, 'used to the library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I really love going.

✓ I really love going there.

The sentence is incomplete without specifying where 'going' refers to. Adding 'there' completes the meaning.

× But I think they would, they would go to there, go there for their exams.

✓ But I think they would go there for their exams.

The phrase 'go to there' is incorrect; 'go there' is the correct form. The repetition 'they would, they would' is redundant and should be simplified.