Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi từ vựng như "a couple how they reading Academy book". Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can fully concentrate on my studies. For example, I usually spend a couple of hours reading academic books and conducting research for my assessments.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

例: In the library, I usually read books and look for documents related to my major subjects to improve my knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho câu trả lời và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và rõ ràng hơn.

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at that time I wasn't aware of the importance of libraries or books. Instead, I usually hung out with my friends.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "do visits" nên là "do visit". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để tăng tính tự nhiên.

例: I'm not really sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm Vietnamese and haven't lived in China. However, in my country, many children do visit the library regularly to study and read books.

× Yes, I often go to library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can fully concentrate on my study.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can fully concentrate on my study.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× For example, I usually spend a couple how they reading Academy book and conducting research for my assessment.

✓ For example, I usually spend a couple of hours reading academic books and conducting research for my assessment.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrasing ('a couple how they reading Academy book'). The correct phrase is 'a couple of hours' to indicate time, 'reading academic books' to describe the activity, and the sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually research my knowledge and reading book also looking for the document invite majority subject.

✓ I usually research to expand my knowledge, read books, and look for documents related to the majority of subjects.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. Correcting the sentence involves using parallel verb forms and appropriate prepositions to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't go to library when I was a kid because in this time I don't have full of awareness to knowledge library or book.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at that time I wasn't fully aware of the importance of libraries or books.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'don't go' should be past tense 'didn't go' to match 'when I was a kid'; 'to library' needs the article 'the'; 'in this time' should be 'at that time'; and the phrase 'full of awareness to knowledge library or book' is awkward and corrected to 'wasn't fully aware of the importance of libraries or books' for clarity.

× When I was a child I usually go hang out with friends.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went to hang out with friends.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to agree with the past time reference 'When I was a child'. Also, adding 'to' before 'hang out' is necessary for correct verb phrase structure.

× I'm not really sure if Chinese kids often go to library because I'm Vietnamese and I haven't lived in China.

✓ I'm not really sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm Vietnamese and I haven't lived in China.

Again, 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× However, in my country many children do visits library regularly to study and read books.

✓ However, in my country many children do visit the library regularly to study and read books.

The auxiliary 'do' requires the base form of the verb 'visit' (not 'visits'). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place.