Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yeah, actually, I don't often go to the library. If I want to reading books, I would stay at home and I'd do this every weekend.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Yeah, it's an interesting question. I usually reading books like Politics, Law or Public Issues. I love Ideology of a Politician that that's my favorite.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Yeah, of course I used to go to the library, but not really often because stay at home and reading books or spend more time with my family and more comfortable for me.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
Yeah, this is a difficult question because I haven't heard about this really often, but I think yes, on average of Chinese kids.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'to reading books' ควรเป็น 'to read books' และควรตอบตรงประเด็นมากขึ้นโดยไม่ใช้คำว่า 'actually' ที่ไม่จำเป็น นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น
例: No, I don't often go to the library. Instead, I prefer to read books at home every weekend because it's more comfortable and quiet there.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 60.0提案: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I usually reading books' ควรเป็น 'I usually read books' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'it's an interesting question' ควรตอบตรงประเด็น พร้อมเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันด้วยคำเชื่อม
例: I usually read books about politics, law, and public issues because I am interested in understanding different political ideologies.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 55.0提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'because stay at home and reading books' ควรเป็น 'because I preferred to stay at home and read books' และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหลมากขึ้น
例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid, but not very often because I preferred to stay at home, read books, and spend time with my family, which was more comfortable for me.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและตรงประเด็นมากขึ้น หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่แน่นอน เช่น 'I haven't heard about this really often' และควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'on average of Chinese kids' ควรเป็น 'on average, Chinese kids do' พร้อมเพิ่มเหตุผลหรือความคิดเห็นเพื่อเสริมคำตอบ
例: I think Chinese kids do often go to the library because many schools encourage reading, and libraries are common places for studying and borrowing books.
文法
× If I want to reading books, I would stay at home and I'd do this every weekend.
✓ If I want to read books, I would stay at home and I'd do this every weekend.
The verb 'want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'reading' should be corrected to 'read'.
× I usually reading books like Politics, Law or Public Issues.
✓ I usually read books like Politics, Law or Public Issues.
After adverbs of frequency like 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'reading' should be 'read'.
× I love Ideology of a Politician that that's my favorite.
✓ I love the ideology of a politician; that's my favorite.
The sentence lacks proper article usage and punctuation. 'Ideology' is a singular noun and needs the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence should be split or connected properly for clarity.
× ...because stay at home and reading books or spend more time with my family and more comfortable for me.
✓ ...because I stay at home and read books or spend more time with my family, which is more comfortable for me.
After 'because', a subject and verb are needed. 'Stay' and 'reading' should be in the correct form with subject 'I'. Also, 'reading' should be 'read' to match parallel structure. The sentence also needs a relative clause for clarity.
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