Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and informative. Try to add a reason or frequency to make it more effective and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say how often you go and why.

例: No, I don't go to the library very often because I usually prefer reading books online at home.

提案: Your answer is direct but a bit short. To improve, add more specific details and use linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

例: I usually read books or study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful place to concentrate.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is unclear. Use the past tense correctly and provide a reason or additional detail to enrich your answer.

例: Unfortunately, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my home.

提案: Your answer is honest but lacks confidence and detail. Try to give a more confident opinion and support it with reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools encourage reading and libraries are common in cities.

× Unfortunately, I don't go into the library when I was a kid.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't go into the library when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Using 'don't go' (present tense) is incorrect here. The correct past tense form is 'didn't go' to match the time frame.