Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use plural form 'books' and correct prepositions, for example, 'books related to sports'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books, especially those related to sports.

提案: Avoid repetition such as 'my my' and use correct verb forms like 'try to read' instead of 'try to reading'. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent, for example, 'First, I relax and find my book, then I start reading it.'

例: First, I relax and find my book, then I start reading it carefully.

提案: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use correct articles like 'the library' and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, 'I went to the library with my father to find a book.'

例: Yes, I remember when I was a child, I often went to the library with my father to find interesting books.

提案: Try to give a complete and clear answer. Avoid incomplete sentences and use correct plural forms like 'kids' and 'children'. Also, express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples.

例: I am not sure if all Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many children in China enjoy reading and visit libraries regularly.

× Yes, of course I like umm, reading book and I also, umm, I am also interested in uh, some books that related to, uh, sports.

✓ Yes, of course I like umm, reading books and I also, umm, am interested in uh, some books that are related to, uh, sports.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and usually plural in this context. Also, 'books that related to' is missing the verb 'are' to form the relative clause correctly.

× At first I try to relax my mind and find my my book and after that I try to reading book as soon as possible.

✓ At first I try to relax my mind and find my book and after that I try to read books as soon as possible.

After 'try to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'try to reading' should be 'try to read'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the general activity of reading.

× Yes, I remember when I was a child, I went my. I went to library with my father to find my. Book.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a child, I went to the library with my father to find my book.

The phrase 'I went my' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I went to the library'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. 'My. Book' should be 'my book' without a period in the middle.

× Well, the Chinese kid, I don't know exactly that they go in the library or not, but I think the children from China are.

✓ Well, Chinese kids, I don't know exactly if they go to the library or not, but I think the children from China do.

'The Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the plural subject 'they'. Also, 'go in the library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. The sentence ending 'I think the children from China are' is incomplete and should be 'I think the children from China do' to complete the thought.