Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「almost all of the day I went to there」は不自然で、「I spend most of my day there」などの表現が適切です。また、文を簡潔にし、自然な英語表現を使うことが重要です。

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I am quite busy. However, since I study international relations at university, I spend most of my day there when I do go.

提案: 回答が不完全で、文法的にも誤りがあります。文を完結させ、具体的な活動内容を追加すると良いでしょう。また、冠詞の使い方にも注意してください。

例: I usually do my homework in the library and sometimes read books to help with my studies.

提案: 時制の一致ができていません（過去の話なので過去形を使う）。また、「I like reading book」ではなく「I liked reading books」が正しいです。内容を整理し、自然な表現にしましょう。

例: Yes, when I was in elementary school, I often went to the library because I liked reading books. Although I don't read much now, I want to start reading again.

提案: 繰り返しや文法の誤りがあります。話の流れを整理し、より自然で簡潔な表現を使いましょう。また、推測を述べる際は適切な表現を使うことが大切です。

例: I live in Japan, so I don't know much about Chinese children. However, I have heard that they study very hard, so I guess many of them often go to the library to study.

× Now I study international relations in my university and almost all of the day I went to there.

✓ Now I study international relations at my university and I go there almost all day.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense ('study') with past tense ('went'). Since the action is ongoing, 'went' should be corrected to 'go'. Also, 'in my university' should be 'at my university' and 'went to there' is incorrect; it should be 'go there'.

× Now I study international relations in my university and almost all of the day I went to there.

✓ Now I study international relations at my university and I go there almost all day.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending a university; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'went to there' is incorrect; 'go there' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× I usually do my homework in library and.

✓ I usually do my homework in the library.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Also, 'in library' lacks the definite article 'the'. The corrected sentence completes the thought and uses the correct article.

× Yes, when I was in elementary school, I often go to the library.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school, I often went to the library.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in elementary school'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× I like reading book at that time, but now I don't read books so much, so I want to read it now.

✓ I liked reading books at that time, but now I don't read books so much, so I want to read them now.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'books'.

× I like reading book at that time, but now I don't read books so much, so I want to read it now.

✓ I liked reading books at that time, but now I don't read books so much, so I want to read them now.

The phrase 'at that time' is correct, but the verb tense and plural forms needed correction as explained above.

× I want to read it now.

✓ I want to read them now.

'It' is singular, but refers to 'books' which is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them'.

× I I live in Japan so I don't know much about the Chinese, but I think Chinese children often go to the library because I have heard that a Chinese kid study very hard, so I guess that they are studying in library.

✓ I live in Japan so I don't know much about the Chinese, but I think Chinese children often go to the library because I have heard that Chinese kids study very hard, so I guess that they are studying in the library.

The sentence has repeated 'I'. 'A Chinese kid study' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese kids study' to agree in number and verb form. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'.