Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态混乱，且句子较长且不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，避免冗长句子，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: I used to go to the library often when I was a student because it was quieter and more comfortable than the dormitory. However, now that I am a freelancer, I prefer to work at home because it is more convenient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，且时态不一致。建议注意动词形式和时态，避免重复，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I really enjoy the comfortable and quiet environment in the library. Therefore, I usually browse the Internet or do my homework there while having a coffee.

提案: 回答时态使用不当，且部分表达不够地道。建议注意时态一致，避免多余介词，表达更简洁自然。

例: No, I didn't go to libraries when I was a kid because there wasn't one in my small town. However, I have visited some libraries in other cities while traveling with my family.

提案: 回答中出现词汇错误（keys应为kids），句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，句子结构清晰，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often see many kids in bookstores or libraries. They usually focus on reading quietly in a corner or at a table.

× I often go to the library when I was a student because it's much more quieter and more comfortable than the dormitory, so it's a better place to study.

✓ I often went to the library when I was a student because it was much quieter and more comfortable than the dormitory, so it was a better place to study.

句子中描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。'go'应改为'went'，'is'应改为'was'，以保持时态一致。

× it's much more quieter and more comfortable than the dormitory

✓ it was much quieter and more comfortable than the dormitory

'quieter'已经是比较级，前面不应加'much more'，应直接用'much quieter'或'quieter'。这里改为'much quieter'。

× But since I have graduated and I am a freelancer right now, I prefer to study or work at home because it's more.

✓ But since I have graduated and I am a freelancer right now, I prefer to study or work at home because it's more comfortable.

句子末尾不完整，'because it's more'缺少比较内容，需补充完整，如'more comfortable'。

× So when I was in in the library, I usually browsing the Internet or or do my homework in the library while having a coffee.

✓ So when I was in the library, I usually browsed the Internet or did my homework in the library while having a coffee.

描述过去习惯动作，动词应使用过去式，'browsing'应改为'browsed'，'do'应改为'did'。

× I have visited on some libraries in other cities while traveling with my family.

✓ I have visited some libraries in other cities while traveling with my family.

'visit'动词后不需要介词'on'，应直接接宾语。

× Yes, I can see many keys in the bookstores or libraries, and they're very focused reading, reading books quietly in the corner or by the table.

✓ Yes, I can see many kids in the bookstores or libraries, and they're very focused, reading books quietly in the corner or by the table.

'keys'应为'kids'，表示孩子。

× and they're very focused reading, reading books quietly in the corner or by the table.

✓ and they're very focused, reading books quietly in the corner or by the table.

'focused'是形容词，后面应加逗号分隔，表示伴随状况。