Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 문장 구조를 개선하고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이며, 좀 더 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually go to my university library because I need a quiet place to study and prepare my resume for job applications.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I often go to my university library because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus on studying and preparing my resume for job applications.

提案: 문법과 표현을 자연스럽게 다듬고, 답변을 명확하게 하세요. 또한, 'MOOC test'가 무엇인지 간단히 설명하면 좋습니다. 예를 들어, 'These days, I am preparing for an adult education exam, so I take online courses and tests (MOOCs) in the library.'

例: Currently, I am preparing for an adult education exam, so I use the library to take online courses and tests through MOOCs.

提案: 문법 오류를 수정하고, 더 자연스럽고 구체적인 표현을 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I used to go to the library every weekend because I loved reading books and didn't have many friends to play with.'

例: Yes, when I was a child, I went to the library every weekend because I loved reading books and didn't have many friends to play with.

提案: 질문에 직접 답변하지 않고 사과하는 대신, 가능한 한 자신의 의견이나 추측을 제시하는 것이 좋습니다. 예를 들어, 'I am not sure about the exact statistics, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly for studying and reading.'

例: I don't know the exact statistics, but I believe many Chinese children often go to the library to study and read books.

× Yes, I usually go to my university library because I am preparing to recruit my job so I need a quiet place to study or prepare the resume.

✓ Yes, I usually go to my university library because I am preparing to get a job, so I need a quiet place to study or prepare my resume.

The phrase 'preparing to recruit my job' is incorrect because 'recruit' is not used reflexively here. The correct modal verb usage is 'preparing to get a job' or 'preparing for a job recruitment.' Also, 'the resume' should be 'my resume' to indicate possession.

× I have the schedule for adult exam in these days, so I take the MOOC test in the library.

✓ I have a schedule for the adult exam these days, so I take MOOC tests in the library.

The phrase 'in these days' is incorrect; 'these days' is used without 'in.' Also, 'the schedule' should be 'a schedule' unless a specific schedule is known. 'MOOC test' should be plural 'MOOC tests' if multiple tests are taken.

× Yes, when I was a kid I went to the library every weekend because I was a child that like the book and I don't have many my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to the library every weekend because I was a child who liked books and I didn't have many friends.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past context. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to a person. 'The book' should be plural 'books' to generalize. 'Don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have.' Also, 'many my friends' is incorrect; 'many friends' is correct.

× Sorry, I don't know the times the Chinese kids go to the library because I am Korean so I don't have the statistics of the Chinese kids.

✓ Sorry, I don't know how often Chinese kids go to the library because I am Korean, so I don't have statistics about Chinese kids.

'The times the Chinese kids go' is awkward; 'how often' is better for frequency. 'The statistics of the Chinese kids' should be 'statistics about Chinese kids.' Also, unnecessary repetition of 'the' before 'Chinese kids' is removed.