Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but could be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'library' multiple times and clarify phrases like 'I meet my girl'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can read peacefully. I usually visit when I need to work on projects or study with my friends in groups.

提案: Your answer covers relevant points but could be more coherent and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'it's a very quiet place' and use linking words such as 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas. Be careful with grammar and word choice, for example, say 'listen to music' instead of 'listen music'.

例: I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place. In addition, I often borrow books since it is cheaper than buying them. Sometimes, I listen to music to help me concentrate while studying.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Avoid repetition and clarify your ideas logically with linking words.

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I was not fond of reading. Instead, my parents collected many books at home, so I preferred reading there.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and improving grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how schools encourage reading. Also, use plural forms correctly, for example, 'libraries' instead of 'library' when referring generally.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to libraries because they enjoy reading in a quiet and comfortable environment. Moreover, schools encourage them to read by assigning library visits as part of their studies.

× Library is a very quiet place and where I can read books peacefully.

✓ The library is a very quiet place where I can read books peacefully.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× And I love to go to library when I need to do some projects and I meet my girl, I meet my friends for the group study.

✓ And I love to go to the library when I need to do some projects and I meet my girl, I meet my friends for group study.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'for the group study' should be 'for group study' because 'group study' is a general activity and does not need the definite article here.

× And sometimes I borrow books from library.

✓ And sometimes I borrow books from the library.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× Sometimes I listen music to concentrate on my study.

✓ Sometimes I listen to music to concentrate on my study.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Saying 'listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music'.

× No, when I was child I am not fond of libraries because I don't like reading books.

✓ No, when I was a child I was not fond of libraries because I didn't like reading books.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the tense should be past ('was not' and 'didn't like') to match the time frame 'when I was a child'.

× When I was child and nowadays I like reading books at the library and my when I was child my father and mother gathered together many books in our home, so I didn't go to library.

✓ When I was a child and nowadays I like reading books at the library, and when I was a child my father and mother gathered many books in our home, so I didn't go to the library.

The phrase 'when I was child' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence was also corrected for clarity and punctuation.

× Yes, Chinese Chinese kids often go to the library.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library.

The repetition of 'Chinese' is unnecessary and incorrect. It should be mentioned only once.

× They are very fond of library and they read books at the library because it's a quiet and comfortable place to read and they are in school.

✓ They are very fond of the library and they read books at the library because it's a quiet and comfortable place to read and they are in school.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Managing school also encourage them to read books on the library.

✓ Managing school also encourages them to read books in the library.

The verb 'encourage' should be in third person singular form 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'Managing school'. Also, the correct preposition with 'read books' and 'library' is 'in', not 'on'.