Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and contains a vocabulary mistake ('recession' instead of 'season' or 'occasion'). Try to give a clear and natural response with correct vocabulary and a bit more detail. For example, mention how often you go and why.

例: Yes, I often go to the library during the weekends because I find it a quiet place to study and relax.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more natural and engaging.

例: I usually do my homework and, in addition, I read important books related to my subject to deepen my understanding.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear vocabulary ('seeming bodies' is confusing). Try to use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas with correct vocabulary and linking words.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading books and learning about different topics, such as science and history.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear meaning. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide reasons using linking words.

例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they prefer studying quietly at home by themselves.

× Yes, I often go to the library every recession.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library every season.

The word 'recession' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'season' to indicate a regular time period. 'Recession' refers to an economic downturn, which does not fit here.

× Yes, I go to library often when I was a kid because I love reading books and finding out about other stuff like seeming bodies and others interesting type.

✓ Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because I loved reading books and finding out about other stuff like human bodies and other interesting types.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'go to library' should be 'went to the library' to match past tense and include the article 'the'; 'seeming bodies' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'human bodies'; 'others interesting type' should be 'other interesting types'. Also, verb tense should be past to match 'when I was a kid'.

× Yes, I go to library often when I was a kid because I love reading books and finding out about other stuff like seeming bodies and others interesting type.

✓ Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because I loved reading books and finding out about other stuff like human bodies and other interesting types.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to agree with the time frame 'when I was a kid'. Similarly, 'love' should be 'loved' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I don't think Chinese get often go to the library because they like to be in a quiet place and often study by myself.

✓ I don't think Chinese people often go to the library because they like to be in a quiet place and often study by themselves.

'Chinese' should be 'Chinese people' to refer to individuals; 'get often go' is incorrect and should be 'often go'; 'by myself' is incorrect when referring to others and should be 'by themselves'.