Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'go to library' and improve grammar by saying 'to study' instead of 'to have studying'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially during exam periods when I need a quiet place to study and revise. I enjoy it because it helps me relax and focus without distractions.

提案: Try to use correct verb forms, for example, 'I usually read books' instead of 'I usually reading'. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific about what you do during your time there.

例: I usually read books and study quietly in the library, especially during exams. It provides a peaceful environment where I can concentrate and make the most of my time.

提案: Use past tense consistently, for example, 'my parents always brought me'. Avoid vague phrases like 'I believe that's the one' and instead explain your thoughts clearly. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your response.

例: Yes, when I was a child, my parents often took me to the library so I could enjoy the quiet atmosphere where everyone was reading and studying.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain the influence of the education system on library use more precisely and avoid informal phrases like 'I think 'cause'.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because the education system emphasises good exam results and encourages developing strong reading habits.

× Sometimes I would like to go to library to have studying and also revision especially during the exam period.

✓ Sometimes I would like to go to the library to study and also revise especially during the exam period.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'to have studying and also revision' is incorrect; the verbs should be in their base form 'to study' and 'revise' after 'to'.

× I really enjoy going to library because I can relax myself and also have a room that only for me.

✓ I really enjoy going to the library because I can relax myself and also have a room that is only for me.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, the phrase 'have a room that only for me' is incomplete; it requires the verb 'is' to form a correct relative clause.

× Well, I usually reading some books and having some my time there.

✓ Well, I usually read some books and have some time to myself there.

The verb 'reading' should be in base form 'read' after 'usually' to indicate habitual action. 'Having some my time' is incorrect; it should be 'have some time to myself' to express personal time correctly.

× Well, especially during the exam period I would like to go to the library so that I can have a quiet place for me to have study.

✓ Well, especially during the exam period I would like to go to the library so that I can have a quiet place to study.

The phrase 'to have study' is incorrect; the verb 'study' should be in base form after 'to'. Also, 'a quiet place for me to have study' is awkward; 'a quiet place to study' is the correct expression.

× Sometimes I will go to library also to have my time.

✓ Sometimes I will go to the library also to have my time.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes I do. When I was a kid, my parents always bring me to the library so that I can immerse in the atmosphere in the library because everyone inside the library are studying and also reading.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a kid, my parents always brought me to the library so that I could immerse myself in the atmosphere in the library because everyone inside the library was studying and also reading.

The question is in past tense, so the answer should be in past tense as well. 'Bring' should be 'brought' to match past tense. 'Can' should be 'could' to reflect past ability. 'Are' should be 'was' to agree with singular collective noun 'everyone'. Also, 'immerse' requires reflexive pronoun 'myself'.

× When I was a kid, my parents always bring me to the library so that I can immerse in the atmosphere in the library because everyone inside the library are studying and also reading.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents always brought me to the library so that I could immerse myself in the atmosphere in the library because everyone inside the library was studying and also reading.

The verb 'immerse' requires a reflexive pronoun 'myself' to be grammatically correct.

× because everyone inside the library are studying and also reading.

✓ because everyone inside the library is studying and also reading.

'Everyone' is a singular indefinite pronoun and requires a singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'.

× So I think that is the reason why Chinese kids go to library.

✓ So I think that is the reason why Chinese kids go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.