Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I don't often go to the library because my school has many resources like textbooks and computers. I go to school every day, so I prefer to study there instead of going to a separate library. This is more convenient and saves me time.

提案: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích những hoạt động bạn làm trong thư viện nếu có, hoặc lý do bạn không đến thư viện. Sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: I don't usually go to the library because I study at school before and after classes. Instead, I study at home where I feel more comfortable.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng, và giải thích rõ lý do. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

例: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my house. I usually read books at school and at home because I was busy with my studies.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in China. Libraries provide a quiet place for studying and asking questions. Also, with the country's rapid development, it is easier for kids to access libraries.

× I don't offer to naturally, because I recently started setting a school that has plenty of resources such as textbooks and computer science.

✓ I don't often go naturally, because I recently started attending a school that has plenty of resources such as textbooks and computer science.

The pronoun 'offer' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'often'. Also, 'setting a school' is incorrect; it should be 'attending a school'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Go to school every day.

✓ I go to school every day.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' completes the sentence and corrects the structure.

× I prefer to visit there rather than visiting a library separate day.

✓ I prefer to visit there rather than visiting a separate library on another day.

The phrase 'library separate day' is incorrect. It should be 'a separate library on another day' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× No, I don't usually go to library because before I go to school every day and after after in school I offer in my home.

✓ No, I don't usually go to the library because I go to school every day, and after school, I stay at home.

Missing articles and incorrect pronouns make the sentence unclear. Adding 'the' before 'library' and correcting 'offer' to 'stay' clarifies the meaning.

× No, I did often go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my house.

✓ No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my house.

The auxiliary verb 'did' should be followed by the base form 'go' and negation 'didn't' to express negative past tense correctly.

× It's still I usually read book at school and at my home I was quite busy with my studies and all of this, so I didn't have managed to.

✓ I usually read books at school and at home. I was quite busy with my studies and all of this, so I didn't manage to go to the library.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. Correcting 'It's still I' to 'I usually', pluralizing 'book' to 'books', and rephrasing the latter part improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, many Chinese kids offer to go to library.

✓ Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library.

The word 'offer' is incorrect here; it should be 'often'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× This is because education is very important in China and neverest provide a quiet place for studying and asking folks.

✓ This is because education is very important in China and libraries provide a quiet place for studying and asking for help.

The word 'neverest' is incorrect and unclear; replacing it with 'libraries' makes sense. Also, 'asking folks' is unclear; 'asking for help' is more appropriate.

× Also with the country's Rapid Development Mall making it easy.

✓ Also, with the country's rapid development, it is easier to access libraries.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rephrasing it to a complete sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.