Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons for going to the library.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I have exams coming up. I find it a quiet place where I can focus on studying and practicing my work effectively.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases.

例: In the library, I usually study and read books that interest me. I enjoy the quiet atmosphere, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas. Provide supporting details with linking words to explain your preference.

例: I did not often go to the library as a child because I preferred quiet places at home where I could read and study comfortably.

提案: Avoid uncertainty and vague expressions. Give a clear opinion supported by specific reasons. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: I think some Chinese kids go to the library, especially those whose families value education. However, many of my friends prefer to do homework or play games at home instead.

× Yes, I regularly go to the library because when I have an exam at next week or tomorrow or whatever, I will go to the library to practice my my work, my my exam.

✓ Yes, I regularly go to the library because when I have an exam next week or tomorrow or whatever, I go to the library to practice my work, my exam.

The phrase 'at next week' is incorrect; 'next week' does not require a preposition. Also, the use of 'will go' is unnecessary here because the sentence talks about a habitual action related to exams, so the present tense 'go' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I regularly go to the library because when I have an exam at next week or tomorrow or whatever, I will go to the library to practice my my work, my my exam.

✓ Yes, I regularly go to the library because when I have an exam next week or tomorrow or whatever, I will go to the library to practice my work, my exam.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'next week'. The correct form is simply 'next week' without any preposition.

× In the library I usually like studying, learning and also I will boring some books that I am.

✓ In the library I usually like studying, learning and also I will borrow some books that I like.

The word 'boring' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'borrow' when taking books temporarily. Also, 'that I am' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'that I like' to express preference.

× I think library is a quite.

✓ I think the library is quiet.

The word 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'completely' or 'very', but the intended meaning is the adjective 'quiet' meaning 'silent or calm'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× So I will stay in the library I like it.

✓ So I will stay in the library because I like it.

The sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two clauses. Adding 'because' clarifies the reason for staying in the library.

× Not usual because when I was a kid I'd like somewhere it's quiet.

✓ Not usually because when I was a kid I liked somewhere quiet.

'Not usual' should be 'not usually' to function as an adverb. 'I'd like' is incorrect here; the past tense 'liked' is appropriate to describe past preferences. Also, 'somewhere it's quiet' should be 'somewhere quiet' for correct adjective use.

× So I I prefer prefer it prefer like some I wrote it house.

✓ So I prefer it; I prefer somewhere like my own house.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words. The phrase 'some I wrote it house' is incorrect; it should be 'somewhere like my own house' to express preference for a quiet place.

× we don't like go to the library because we are like do my homework or play the games in at home because.

✓ We don't like to go to the library because we prefer to do our homework or play games at home.

The phrase 'like go' should be 'like to go' or 'prefer to go'. 'Play the games' should be 'play games' without 'the'. The preposition 'in at home' is incorrect; 'at home' is sufficient. Also, 'we are like do' is incorrect; 'we prefer to do' is correct.