Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas (like loving reading and going to the library as a kid) and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary related to reading and libraries.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I have loved reading since childhood. There, I enjoy discovering fascinating fairy tales and other interesting stories.

提案: Your answer has some good points but contains some unnatural expressions and grammar mistakes. For example, 'rewrite it at home' is unclear and probably incorrect. Try to use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' to make your answer more coherent. Also, be specific about what you do with the books and use correct verb forms.

例: First, I browse the shelves to find interesting books. Then, if I enjoy a book, I take notes at home and recommend it to my friends.

提案: Your answer is quite natural and includes a personal story, which is good. However, the phrase 'you made me go through my memories' is a bit unnatural. Try to start directly with your experience and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy like 'used to always'.

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. For example, in first grade, I would sometimes hide there during class breaks to read books, which was a very joyful experience for me.

提案: Your answer is honest but could be more structured and natural. Use linking words like 'because' or 'but' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'as if I'm from Georgia'. Instead, clearly state your perspective and provide a comparison.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I'm from Georgia. However, Georgian children usually love reading and often visit the library.

× I love reading books since I was a kid.

✓ I have loved reading books since I was a kid.

The sentence uses 'love' in present simple with 'since I was a kid', which requires present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Use 'have loved' instead of 'love'.

× I rewrite it at home and tell my friends to read it too.

✓ I rewrite them at home and tell my friends to read them too.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'books', which is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number.

× Georgian kids usually love to read books and they always go to the library.

✓ Georgian kids usually love to read books and they always go to the library.

No correction needed here as the verb forms agree with the plural subject 'Georgian kids'.